The cover letter for Audit Recruiment / Tax and Advisory Recruiment

Hoang Dinh Hung [SUSPENDED]

75 Nguyen Tu Gian Str, Go Vap Disc, HCMC
Phone Number: 0167-766-7075
August 23, 2016

Mr.Tuan Anh/ Mrs. Lien Huong
Audit Recruiment / Tax and Advisory Recruiment
Deloitte Vietnam

Dear Mr.Tuan Anh/ Mrs. Lien Huong

I knowed Deloitte when I came ACCA Workshop, and I am very impressed with the history of your company and found that this is the environment I want to join. Then I heard the Breaking the limit competition, with an internship opportunity at Deloitte. For this reason I am writing to you to nominate me as a candidate to compete for this position.

I am the final student at University of Economics Ho Chi Minh City (UEH) with major is accounting. I used to internship at ASC Audit Company for one month and learn more about some technique in audit. I am studing ACCA F3 by myself and wish can get ACCA qualification in 5 years.

My strength are teamwork, work under presure, and with responsbility, I always complete my work on time. Beside, I also have communication skill, good at english and office tools.

Attached with this cover letter is my resume which would detail you regarding my abilities and qualification.
Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely

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Sincerely,
Hoang Dinh Hung

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