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An email: A lost bag You went to your friend Jay's house yesterday and you left your bag there.



Hamin 1 / -  
Mar 20, 2023   #1
You went to your friend Jay's house yesterday and you left your bag there.

Write an email to Jay.



Say:

what colour the bag is
what is inside the bag
where in the house you left it.


My writing:

Dear Jay,
Hi Jay, I hope you are doing well. Yesterday I have a wonderful day. I very funs because you invited me to your house. But I need to tell you something. When I went to your house yesterday, I left my bag there. The bag is red. Inside the bag has only the document. If you see it, you can contact me. Thank you for seeing my email. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Bye, Hamin

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15411  
Mar 21, 2023   #2
The letter writing task shares the same criteria as the other Task 1 essays. That means, you cannot write less than 150 words. You will receive an automatic failing score for writing only 80 words. In fact, you will score in the negative because there will be percentage deductions on the word count based on the lacking number. So there will be nothing left for the score, even when sectional scores are administered to the test results. Basically, you have not written enough words to qualify for a passing consideration in terms of scoring rubic considerations. The problematic grammar structure for the sentences will also result in a failing GRA score, even when your presentation meets the information requirements as per instructions. You need to write at least 150 words, 175 being the best word number and, you also need to focus on the clarity of your writing based upon correct sentence formation in the paragraphs. Always aim to write 3 paragraphs, no matter how short, for the task 1 essay.


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