"Evident talent" - Reference letter to Chevening

Hello i wanted to ask your opinion about a reference letter for chevening, can you help me please?

impressed by the evident talent

To Whom It May Concern,
It is a great pleasure to write this letter of recommendation for Ms. Reem Noaman. In January 2011, Ms. Noaman Reem joined the Bibliotheca Alexandrina as a junior graphic designer in the Publishing Department, which I was heading until 2014 and am continuing to monitor the Publishing team, as a Senior Publishing Expert and Special Advisor, till the present date. I would like to take the opportunity to recommend Ms. Reem for the Chevening Scholarship.

For over eight years, I have been observing Ms. Reem and her mode of work, and I was impressed by her evident talent. Reem has been developing her skills and managed to master a wide range of sophisticated Graphics and multimedia techniques, and applying them in her works in the Library.

Presently, she is a senior graphic designer and has been engaged in several creative projects and her efforts were commendable and appreciated. She has a creative eye for shape and form, plus a fine taste for colors and is very professional, along with her devotion, enthusiasm, and dedication in her work.

I feel confident that she will continue to stand out in her field. Reem is a dedicated and trustworthy person, very reliable, and is a team player. She is fierce in her work and passionate about graphic design. She would be an excellent candidate for the Chevening scholarship Program.

I would highly recommend, without reservation, Reem Noaman for this Prestigious Scholarship.

@reemanoaman
Hi there. Here's my personal feedback on your writing. Hopefully, this will somehow give you a better idea of what to anticipate for the program!

Is there a word count for reference letters that's been specified? If there's none, I would firstly recommend expanding more on the details that you have laid out here.

If we take a look at your first paragraph, the structure appears to be rather off because of the numerous dependent clauses that were seemingly squished together without a particular regard for the pattern of writing. I recommend trying to delve more into the usage of pauses and punctuation marks because these can definitely boost your writing by a milestone.

Furthermore, when you're trying to elaborate the projects that you've completed for this specific individual, I heavily recommend that you try to give a brief explanation and example. Even just one can be a huge boost for your application materials, especially because your writing needs to be more intensive as possible.

The more specific these details are, the better.

@Maria

Thank you for your feedback. I will amend the letter and rewrite it again and resend it back if you don't mind

thank you very much