Letter - to express my interest in the position as a local tour guide

Letter - application to the tourism office

Dear Sir,
My name is Tuan and I am writing to you to express my interest in the position as a local tour guide as in your advertisment.

The reason why I am seeking this position is about that I want to build a better understanding of culture and people here and develop my language skills. In addition, I will be satisfied personal passion by myself because becoming a tour guide has been a my dream since I was a child.

I used to be the vice president of rhetoric club in my university for three years. Therefore, I have a good voice, diverse facial expressions and plenty of presentation experiences also knowledge base on culture and history. Moreover, I was a champion of a contest of city-level speech about the beauty of culture and people of Ha Noi.

I believe that I am a potential candidate for two good reasons.
If you find my skills and experiences suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Your faithfully,
Tuan.

Use your fullname in the introduction. Tell the person the date, section of publication, and the title of the publication to meet the information regarding how you found the want and. since this isa Task 1 test, you can make up the references. The secondand third paragraphs do not make any sense. The sentences are incorrectly set up and, the vocabulary used is incorrect. Nobody will beable to follow or understand what you are trying to say.

You did not indicate contact information for any potential interviews. This is a failing score type of presentation as you did not put any effort into writing clearly and making sure your letter metthe writing requirements.

Many thanks for your comment. It is the first time I have written Task 1 and I will be more hardworking to improve my writing skill.