Fascination by hardware and software. Motivation Letter for applying to a master proramme

Letter of Motivation

Dear respected committee,
My name is XXX, and I'm highly honoured to write this letter of motivation to express my interest in applying for XXX Masters' programme at XXX University. I really appreciate the opportunity that this programme offers, as it would be a valuable step in my life.

I've always been fascinated by hardware and software and how they might be combined to create smart things. As a result, I joined the Electrical department. This helped me build a strong foundation, especially in programming and electronics, and gave me the chance to work on projects that gave me real-world experience. I also had the opportunity to attend XXX professional training to study microcontroller architecture and FPGA design, which provided me with significant industry skills.

As part of my job, I've worked on a number of embedded projects, experimenting with different embedded kits like Arduino and Raspberry Pi 3 and writing drivers for industrial microcontrollers like ARM.

I am eager to further my education and get qualified in the field of embedded systems. I believe that the advanced topics covered in this programme will be the best fit for my goals.

Finally, I would like to express my appreciation for the studying environment in such a prestigious university as XXX and my enthusiasm to explore a new country like XXX, which stands out for its deep-rooted history, rich culture, and a well-established educational and social system based on equality and respect. I think this opportunity will be a great milestone in my career and a valuable social and cultural experience.

Thank you for considering my application.
XXX

The writer has developed a friendly letter of introduction. It does not reflect the necessary information requirements for a letter of motivation. The total lack of relevance of this letter makes me wonder if the writer was not provided with some writing guidelines for this with the application form. He totally skipped the motivating factor in favor of a summarized background. He cannot use this as a motivation letter

When the new letter is written focus on 2 things the career reason for studying and the reason the studies are relevant to a career plan. Those are the aspects that normally motivate graduate studies. These are the compelling factors that the reviewers consider when evaluating an applicant. Why would these studies be usefeel to the applicant? That is the main concern of a motivation letter.