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I am writing this letter to express my eligibility for attaining a Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship to support my dream of studying the financial specialization program at a Hungarian university. This scholarship will upgrade my already decent knowledges in finance that can help me to boost my country's economy.
My path in finance was not predetermined from the beginning. I could not choose what I want to study even after school, so my choosing of finance as a studying course was completely accidental. I was thinking this way even during my 1st course, but everything changed since the moment I took a subject called Corporate Finance to study. I met my favorite professor Asylbek Duskaliyev that changed all my vision on finance. His teaching skills made me so enthusiastic and inspired on how he can so simply explain all finance stuff like finance reporting, ESG principles, investing, and many other things. After the course with him I understood that I need to know more and more about everything that includes finance, and get to know as much experience in area of finance as possible.
At present, I am studying in 4th course, and also, I have completed 2 internships: first internship has been completed in Tele2/Altel company in an accounting department, the second one has been completed in Home Credit Bank in treasury department. I have discovered how important can be financial management in such big international companies, however our small and medium-sized businesses in Kazakhstan lack of quality financial management. I aim for education in Hungarian university to help businesses in Kazakhstan with financial management and corporate finance by financial consulting. However, I need to deepen my financial knowledges in financial management and corporate, so I have decided to pursue corporate finance at Hungarian University. I have discovered Stipendium Hungaricum so as not to push my parents with money.
The Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship represents a remarkable opportunity. It would not only provide an essential support for my academical and personal pursuits, but also allow me to immerse myself in Hungary's vibrant culture throughout my studies. The prospect of living in a country with such a rich history and cultural heritage is incredibly exciting and promises to be a transformative experience. Considering the high standards of its academic institutions, I am convinced that Hungary is the ideal environment for me to achieve my goals.
I am writing this letter to express my eligibility for attaining a Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship to support my dream of studying the financial specialization program at a Hungarian university. This scholarship will upgrade my already decent knowledges in finance that can help me to boost my country's economy.
My path in finance was not predetermined from the beginning. I could not choose what I want to study even after school, so my choosing of finance as a studying course was completely accidental. I was thinking this way even during my 1st course, but everything changed since the moment I took a subject called Corporate Finance to study. I met my favorite professor Asylbek Duskaliyev that changed all my vision on finance. His teaching skills made me so enthusiastic and inspired on how he can so simply explain all finance stuff like finance reporting, ESG principles, investing, and many other things. After the course with him I understood that I need to know more and more about everything that includes finance, and get to know as much experience in area of finance as possible.
At present, I am studying in 4th course, and also, I have completed 2 internships: first internship has been completed in Tele2/Altel company in an accounting department, the second one has been completed in Home Credit Bank in treasury department. I have discovered how important can be financial management in such big international companies, however our small and medium-sized businesses in Kazakhstan lack of quality financial management. I aim for education in Hungarian university to help businesses in Kazakhstan with financial management and corporate finance by financial consulting. However, I need to deepen my financial knowledges in financial management and corporate, so I have decided to pursue corporate finance at Hungarian University. I have discovered Stipendium Hungaricum so as not to push my parents with money.
The Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship represents a remarkable opportunity. It would not only provide an essential support for my academical and personal pursuits, but also allow me to immerse myself in Hungary's vibrant culture throughout my studies. The prospect of living in a country with such a rich history and cultural heritage is incredibly exciting and promises to be a transformative experience. Considering the high standards of its academic institutions, I am convinced that Hungary is the ideal environment for me to achieve my goals.
