ILETS: informal letter to the London Information Centre.

Next month you are coming to Britain to study at a university in Scotland. You have two-day stopover in London. You need accommodation for one night and you would like to use this time to see a lot of London. Wright a letter to the London Travel Information Centre.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to get some information about London. Recently I have been told that I entered the university in Scotland. That is why I have to be there in a month. I have already got a ticket and I will have two-days stopover in London. I feel so excited about that. I have been given a chance to visit such a marvelous city and I am going to use it.

However, my time in London cannot be very pleasant not having accommodation. I need a room for a night, but it has to be something cheap as my finance is not very huge. Where should I stay bearing in mind my budget.

I have read a lot about places of interests in London and I am looking forward to see them. I would like to visit a much attractions as many as possible. Could give an advice what places I should go to first?

I will need to use some transport. I might go by bus around the city, but I am not sure if I can afford it. What means of transport do you think I should use.

I am looking forward to getting necessary intelligences and coming to London.

Yours faithfully,
Tetanya Dmytrenko

Recently I have been told that I entered the university in Scotland. That is why I have to be there in a month. I have already got a ticket and I will have two-days stopover in London.-- This part is too long.

Recently I have been told that I entered have been accepted to the university in Scotland, and on my way there I will have two-days stopover in London.

However, my time in London cannot be very pleasant not having without accommodation.

When you use many, it is for something that you can count, like the stars. There are many start.
When you use much, it is for something that cannot be counted, like water. There is much water.
I would like to visit as many much attractions as many as possible.

Could you please give some advice what places I should go to first?

:-)

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Dear Ms./Mrs./Mr.Name

Subject: Title of Subject

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Sincerely

your Name