Indefatigable efforts/work ethic / ability to self-improve; Letter of recommendation

How does this letter of recommendation sound

Date:

To Whom It May Concern:

I am very pleased to recommend XXXX for admission to XXXX. Having been his mathematics teacher for three consecutive years, I have watched this young man develop both academically and personally into a mature individual, ready in every way for his college years.

With an outstanding intellectual ability and strong leadership qualities, XXXX has always led and held the highest position in numerous subjects as well as other extracurricular events successfully.

Having been his teacher, I can vouch that he is one of the most brilliant and kindhearted student that I have encountered in my career. He is an energetic, enthusiastic leader in all jobs of his class as well as voluntary activities held by school. XXXX is also very responsible in his work and is able to handle the pressure of deadlines very well. He has an extremely amiable personality and is popular among his classmates as he shows great consideration and deep respect for others. On many occasions, he has helped his classmates in various subjects. Being honest and hardworking, he demonstrates the best of behavior and excellent study habits.

As his previous teacher, I strongly believe that his perseverance, intellectual ability and enthusiasm for learning and working are qualities that should help him well in his future jobs. He is undoubtedly the type of student that has the potential for great success at the college level. His indefatigable efforts, combined with his work ethic and ability to self-improve, are recipes for success in the years to come. I wholeheartedly recommend him for admission to your institution and wish him the very best in his further endeavors.

Sincerely,

(name)
Teacher

Sounds amazing! I hope and pray my teachers gave such glowing recommendations! he made a good choice in choosing you for a recommendation, I know too many teachers who just use a template for all their letters, just inserting the students name.

I know you're a math teacher, but if you could take a look at mine?

Being his mathematics teacher for three consecutive years, I watched his amazing progress, in both academic and personal.


You said about this relationship in the earlier para and therefore I think you don't need to repeat. This is my suggestion;
In my teaching career, I have come across only a few students who are extremely brilliant and kindhearted and xxx is one of them.
If you can tell them about any of his special contributions to the school or community, that's great :)