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My interest and passion for taking part in master program of energy conversion and management


gol1363 1 / -  
Feb 15, 2016   #1
I am writing to express my interest and passion for taking part in master program of
energy conversion and management in university Offenburg.
Both my educational background and work experience admit my great affection and
motivation in mechanical field, particularly in the energy aspects and mechanical energy
convertor systems. My early experience of serious work with mechanical component
commence when I was just a 12 year old curious boy, when I occupied a part time job as
a motor car mechanic in my uncle workshop. Performing mechanical repair at that age
was so exciting for me that I made my decision to make my life by study and work in
mechanic branch of science and technics. My sharp improvement in auto mechanic ,both
technical and theory, strengthened me to win the first position of national skills
competition for two years in age 17 and 18 in Hamedan( a province of Iran).
My engineering understanding of mechanic went farther after I passed a bachelor
program in "Heat and Fluid Flow" branch of mechanical engineering. Thanks to my pre
practical experience, I finished this period of education with honor and I was one of the
10% excellent students in every semester between other mechanical students.
With capability that was gifted to me by mechanical engineering degree, in a really hard
contest, I succeed to occupy an excellent career opportunity in the most important energy
provider company in Iran (National Iranian Gas Company) which has an international
figure. My professional performance has been started in energy industry after more than
500 hours learning courses in both managerial and technical topics in natural gas transfer
part of the company. Increasing energy efficiency as well as lowering greenhouse gases
emission are the most noticeable activity of my co worker and I ,and due to my proposes
some effective measures have been applied since I am working in this company.
It is really crucial for me to make myself up to date with the latest technologies and
scientific point of views in energy concepts, so I attend a master program in energy
conversion four years ago. This program thought me many rewarding lessens about the
technical side of energy scope, but now I need to learn some more about the energy
management and take part in an academic program in this field, because today
managerial knowledge in energy industry has become essential and popular.
Study in Energy Conversion and Management program of Offenburg University which is
located in Germany, that is known as the cradle of mechanic worldwide, would open a
bright way to development and rise for both my career and educational goals. By
obtaining academic knowledge in energy management, I could find a better job
opportunity in international corporations that work in power and energy industry.
Nowadays, demand for energy manager specialists around the world is considerable high
and this demand will surge in future, and most of mechanical engineers that graduated in energy management branches could find magnificent position in well-known energy

and power companies. In addition, study at your multicultural university which is located
in the heart of Europe, will help me to improve my Germany and English in a native
atmosphere, so I would be ready to work in an international environment.
Graduation in master program at Offenburg University will grant an excellent opportunity
to me for pursuing my education in higher level in Germany. I will have a good chance to
adopt myself with your educational system, and also connect to other universities'
professors to find and apply for a good doctoral program with a better preparation.
Acceptation to study master program of "Energy Conversion and Management" in
Offenburg University which is situated in a very industrialize part of a developed country
like Germany is a desire for any mechanical engineer like me and I would be very happy
if I received the admission for this program.
nav3057 3 / 4  
Feb 18, 2016   #2
Try separating the paragraph by using extra Enter .

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... was so exciting for me that I made my decisiondecided to make my life by study and work in mechanical branch of sS cience and technicsTechnology . My sharp improvement in auto mechanics , both technical and theory, (...) in age 17 and 18 in Hamedan( a province of Iran).


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