International Affairs Department, Correct My Reference Letter..

REFERENCE LETTER

International Affairs Department

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:

I am writing you in order to support Ms. XXX and her desire to participate in Women University Scholarships.

I have known the applicant for three and a half years since her entry to our university in 2006 Academic Year. She was in my class of xxx, xxx, and xxx.

The applicant shows her interest in student activities. In first, second, and third year, she was an active member of the Student Organization and the coordinator of lecture-assistants in the same department. In addition, she was lecture assistant in the subject xxx, xxx and xxx. Being a student activist gives her high maturity, good leadership, managerial skill, and easily adapted with the new environment. The best thing about her is that she still can manage her time to concentrate on her study even with many extracurricular and organizational activities. This is shown by her GPA is xxx (scale 4) which is consider very satisfactory.

I see that she is highly motivated to join Exchange Program at Women University. She is interested in becoming a person who can positively contribute to the development of our country. She plan to learn in Women University Japan and will adapted in our country.

Based on her experiences, academic report, and highly motivated I believed that she could be successful while taking her education in Women University, which has a good environment for research and finish her research on scheduled with a good result.

Please find enclosed the supporting documents. I do hope you could consider this applicant favorably.
Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation.

Sincerely,

: )

Thank You very much name_here.. :D

You really help me.. : )

Dear Madam, Sir:

Subject: Recommendation Letter for Anita Puspita Negara

I hereby certify that [my name] is a student at [my university]. She is now doing her fouth year. Her academic performance is very good, producing a GPA of 3.42 in a 4 scale.

I have handled the course of Engineering Drawing in her first semester. She has done that course good. After that, in her fifth semester she became lecture assistant of Engineering Drawing. In all cases, I find her easy to work with because of her strong affection in communication skills, pleasant personality, simpler approach to explain something, good understanding, and open minded.

Looking at her academic performance and motivation, I believe she is suitable candidate for your scholarship recipient and, therefore, I have no hesitation to recommend her be awarded the scholarship.

Should there be any inquiries, I can contacted by email at []
Thanking you kindly for your attention, I remain.

Very truly yours,

(please check my reference letter... thank you so much.. ) :D

...since her entry to our university in the 2006 Academic Year. She was in three of my classes: xxx, xxx, and xxx.

In addition, she was lecture assistant in the subjects xxx, xxx and xxx. Being a student activist gives reflects her high maturity, good leadership, managerial skill, and easily versatility in adapting to new environments.

Based on her experiences, academic report, and highly motivated I believed that she could be successful while taking her education in Women University (what is the name of the University? is it really called Women University?), which has a good environment for research and exploration. and finish her research on scheduled with a good result.

:-)

The other letter is good, but I think you should put 2 of the 3 paragraphs together as one. You can decide which two paragraphs to put together. It is not very important. These letters are both well-written.

Thank you Kevin.. :D

Could you please check my 2nd reference letter..?
thank you in advance..

Yes, I was looking at the other one, too, and it seems okay. I was trying to say, though, that it would be good as 2 paragraphs instead of 3.

I hereby certify that [my name] is a student at [my university]. She is now doing her fouth year. Her academic performance is very good, producing a GPA of 3.42 in a 4 scale.

I have handled the course of Engineering Drawing in NAME's first semester. She has done that course good was a high achiever in that course. After that, in her fifth semester she became lecture assistant of Engineering Drawing. In all cases, I find her easy to work with because of her strong affection in communication skills, pleasant personality, effective approaches to explain concepts to others, and her open-mindedness.

Looking at her academic performance and motivation, I believe she is suitable candidate for your scholarship recipient and, therefore, I have no hesitation to about giving her a recommendation.

:-)