('lecture in English and Persian') A short Letter

Reebrahim 1 / 1

Nov 23, 2012 #1

I would appreciate of someone could help me in correcting my essay, thanks in advance.

Dear Dr Hosseini,

According to Dr. Bagher's email, I decide to replace him with Mr. Alizadeh for December 12, 2012.

As usual, please ask Mr. Alizadeh to give you the title of lecture in both English and Persian.

Thanks in advance,

Reza

dumi 1 / 6793

Nov 24, 2012 #2

Hi,

I assume that this is just a business e-mail communication and Dr Bagher had informed him about his inability to attend to this lecture... (When you make a post, it is better to tell us what the background is, so that we can give you a more relevant feed back)

So, here's my recommendation;

Dear Dr Hosseini,

As informed by Dr. Bagher, he would not be able to conduct the lecture on the 12th December 2012. Therefore I decided to replace him with Mr. Alizadeh for this session and please request Mr. Alizadeh to submit you the title of the lecture in both English and Persian.

OP Reebrahim 1 / 1

Nov 25, 2012 #3

Dear Duminda,

Many thanks for your help and attention.
This is exactly first time that I contact with "EssayForum.com" and your comment "(When you make a post, it is better to tell us what the background is, so that we can give you a more relevant feed back)" will be very important for me in future.

thanks again,

best wishes,
RE