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Would you please give any tips or corrections or comments about my motivation letter? Thanks a lot!
My name is xxx. I graduated with a Bachelor Degree Program in International Business from xxx University of Applied Sciences in April 2011. In addition to all the documents provided, I would like to tell why I want to study the Master's Degree Program in Corporate Environmental Management (CEM) at the University of xxx.
Nowadays, China's government has brought up the concept of "green GDP". It means the government has realized that environmental issues are one key factor of productivity and sustainability. As the recognition of the concept is getting clearer and clearer and the concept is being focused more and more. Corporations, as one of the social economy factors, need to take environmental issues into account in order to be competitive in the long term competition. Therefore, professionals who can recognize and manage the environmental, economic and social issues relevant to the management of organization are needed in my country. My bachelor degree has given me a strong business background to study the program in CEM. My career goal is to aid in the promotion of environmentally responsible business practices. I strongly believe the professional study and training from this program will help me reach my career goal.
The CEM students' career stories also inspired me and engendered my interest in an environmentally business career. The content of their jobs is interesting and challenging and their employment fields show me the career path the master's program leads to. Some of them have a business academic background just like I do and they manage their jobs well with the knowledge provided by the program. Besides, the graduates in CEM have plenty of employment opportunities in the environmentally business field. I can not help thinking why I do not take this opportunity to deepen my knowledge and start a career in this field that I like?
My practical trainings in Rovaniemi attests of my communication and language skills which is essential in my opinion when studying in CEM and working after graduating from the program. I have lived in Finland for years and I manage the Finnish language, which is also a reason why I want to go back to study in Finland. I chose the University of xxx because it was the first to offer master's program in CEM in the Nordic region, which means the university has experience in offering the program. The program in CEM works in close co-operation with the Department of Environmental Sciences within the university. I believe it can help me have a better understanding of the theory of CEM.
During the study time, my family will cover all my expenses in Finland. I hope I have a chance to prove I am a qualified student in your program and am looking forward to hearing from you about my application in the near future.
Would you please give any tips or corrections or comments about my motivation letter? Thanks a lot!
My name is xxx. I graduated with a Bachelor Degree Program in International Business from xxx University of Applied Sciences in April 2011. In addition to all the documents provided, I would like to tell why I want to study the Master's Degree Program in Corporate Environmental Management (CEM) at the University of xxx.
Nowadays, China's government has brought up the concept of "green GDP". It means the government has realized that environmental issues are one key factor of productivity and sustainability. As the recognition of the concept is getting clearer and clearer and the concept is being focused more and more. Corporations, as one of the social economy factors, need to take environmental issues into account in order to be competitive in the long term competition. Therefore, professionals who can recognize and manage the environmental, economic and social issues relevant to the management of organization are needed in my country. My bachelor degree has given me a strong business background to study the program in CEM. My career goal is to aid in the promotion of environmentally responsible business practices. I strongly believe the professional study and training from this program will help me reach my career goal.
The CEM students' career stories also inspired me and engendered my interest in an environmentally business career. The content of their jobs is interesting and challenging and their employment fields show me the career path the master's program leads to. Some of them have a business academic background just like I do and they manage their jobs well with the knowledge provided by the program. Besides, the graduates in CEM have plenty of employment opportunities in the environmentally business field. I can not help thinking why I do not take this opportunity to deepen my knowledge and start a career in this field that I like?
My practical trainings in Rovaniemi attests of my communication and language skills which is essential in my opinion when studying in CEM and working after graduating from the program. I have lived in Finland for years and I manage the Finnish language, which is also a reason why I want to go back to study in Finland. I chose the University of xxx because it was the first to offer master's program in CEM in the Nordic region, which means the university has experience in offering the program. The program in CEM works in close co-operation with the Department of Environmental Sciences within the university. I believe it can help me have a better understanding of the theory of CEM.
During the study time, my family will cover all my expenses in Finland. I hope I have a chance to prove I am a qualified student in your program and am looking forward to hearing from you about my application in the near future.
