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Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to introduce myself, Abdullah Mosleh , a native of Yemen. Upon completing my secondary education, I pursued my higher education at Thamar University, Yemen, where I specialized in Information Technology within the Faculty of Computer Science and Information Systems. I successfully obtained my bachelor's degree with a commendable final grade of "good," achieving an average score of 88 out of 100.
My passion for information technology was ignited at a young age when my uncle, who hails from Germany, gifted our family our first laptop during one of his visits. Intrigued by its intricacies, I embarked on a journey of exploration into the world of technology. Despite the predominantly theoretical nature of my studies in Yemen, my desire to delve deeper into the practical aspects of my field has led me to aspire towards postgraduate studies in Germany.
Germany, renowned for its esteemed universities and commitment to free education, is where I aim to further enrich my academic pursuits. The Computer Science program at Clausthal University of Technology particularly appeals to me due to its strong emphasis on practical applications. The opportunity to collaborate with industry partners on my master's thesis aligns perfectly with my ambition to specialize in areas such as artificial intelligence, web and network design, and cybersecurity.
In preparation for this academic endeavor, I have dedicated myself to language studies, attaining a current proficiency level of B1 after undergoing German language courses in Alexandria, Egypt. It would be a tremendous honor for me to be granted admission to Clausthal University.
Looking ahead, my ultimate goal post-graduation is to establish my own IT company in Yemen. I firmly believe that nurturing a pool of skilled professionals in the field of technology is paramount for the country's post-war reconstruction efforts. By contributing to the modernization of Yemen through technological innovation, I am eager to play a part in shaping its future.
I eagerly anticipate the opportunity to immerse myself in German culture and further enhance my linguistic abilities.
Yours sincerely,
Abdullah
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to introduce myself, Abdullah Mosleh , a native of Yemen. Upon completing my secondary education, I pursued my higher education at Thamar University, Yemen, where I specialized in Information Technology within the Faculty of Computer Science and Information Systems. I successfully obtained my bachelor's degree with a commendable final grade of "good," achieving an average score of 88 out of 100.
My passion for information technology was ignited at a young age when my uncle, who hails from Germany, gifted our family our first laptop during one of his visits. Intrigued by its intricacies, I embarked on a journey of exploration into the world of technology. Despite the predominantly theoretical nature of my studies in Yemen, my desire to delve deeper into the practical aspects of my field has led me to aspire towards postgraduate studies in Germany.
Germany, renowned for its esteemed universities and commitment to free education, is where I aim to further enrich my academic pursuits. The Computer Science program at Clausthal University of Technology particularly appeals to me due to its strong emphasis on practical applications. The opportunity to collaborate with industry partners on my master's thesis aligns perfectly with my ambition to specialize in areas such as artificial intelligence, web and network design, and cybersecurity.
In preparation for this academic endeavor, I have dedicated myself to language studies, attaining a current proficiency level of B1 after undergoing German language courses in Alexandria, Egypt. It would be a tremendous honor for me to be granted admission to Clausthal University.
Looking ahead, my ultimate goal post-graduation is to establish my own IT company in Yemen. I firmly believe that nurturing a pool of skilled professionals in the field of technology is paramount for the country's post-war reconstruction efforts. By contributing to the modernization of Yemen through technological innovation, I am eager to play a part in shaping its future.
I eagerly anticipate the opportunity to immerse myself in German culture and further enhance my linguistic abilities.
Yours sincerely,
Abdullah
