A motivation letter for a program at the University of Rome.

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Motivation letter
Arriving at Barcelona airport with two pieces of luggage and knowing no one, I embarked on my journey to pursue my dream study. Because I truly believe that instead of chasing success, one should follow their passions, and success will soon chase them, which made me realize that monetary value is of secondary importance. As an international student in Spain, the anticipation of starting this new chapter made me feel like a little girl in the midst of the bustling airport. I could hear my heart pounding with a mix of excitement and nerves.

Dear Admissions Committee,

As an international student in a one-year master's degree program on xxx law at the University of xxxx, I would like to express my sincere gratitude for the xx program at the University of Rome.

During my experience at AIESEC, the largest youth organization all over the world, as a project manager and team leader, I managed a project called "Invest Your Future" where young volunteers from different countries came to Pakistan, and worked in local businesses in order to gain international experience.

My first introduction to arbitration began when I participated in the project "Alternative Dispute Resolution and free legal aid provision to the population" financed by the European Union, where I provided pro bono services to local businesses. Furthermore, my bachelor's thesis on "The recognition and enforcement of international commercial arbitral awards in Pakistan" provided me with a solid understanding of arbitration agreements, arbitral awards, and the significance of transparency in international dispute settlement, along with the New York Convention of 1958.

Moreover, from January 31 to February 4, I will be attending in the Swiss Arbitration Summit 2024, held in Geneva, Switzerland. At the same time, I have been accepted by Basel Winter Arbitration School, which will be held from February 5 to 9 at the Law Faculty of Basel University in Switzerland. In this interactive five-day program, I will have a chance to learn in-depth about UNCLOS arbitration, International commercial arbitration, Business and human rights arbitration (The Hague Rules), Investor-State arbitration, and Arbitration and mediation at the World Intellectual Property Organization. The knowledge that I will gain from this school will provide me with a valuable background in international dispute litigation and will help me be an excellent student in the International Dispute Settlement xxxxxx program.

The xxx program serves as a bridge between my academic and professional aspirations. Therefore, I have three main reasons to pursue the xxx Program. Firstly, my foremost objective is to become a qualified arbitrator in international commercial dispute settlement. The Master's program in "Dispute Settlement" at this university covers nearly all aspects of the field in which I aim to specialize. Core subjects such as "Contract Law in International Commercial Arbitration"," and "The New York Convention of 1985" provide the optimal foundation for understanding dispute settlement in its own context.

I firmly believe that, as a developing country, Pakistan, the main country in the Sauth Asia importing oil and gas, highlights the importance of having more qualified arbitrators in dispute resolution litigation.

Moreover, I am a virtual reader of the University of Rome. So, I am currently reading "Comparative Law in Arbitration" written by Prof. xxxx, a lecturer in the course "Arbitration Agreement in International Commercial Arbitration" at this Program. If I accepted, I will have a chance to discuss the notion of the separability of the arbitration agreement and the principle of competence-competence with him. Furthemore, one of my academic objectives is to create a fund for both Swiss and Pakistani students in order that those young practioners pursue at least one year of study with a scholarship, which will have an enormous effect on both countries' diplomatic relationships.

In conclusion, I am aware that studying in the "European Master in Law and Economics" program will be challenging due to different educational systems. However, considering that I am one of the top students in my class with an average of 97.33, and my substantial practical experience in law, I feel prepared to take on this challenge. Thanks for your consideration. I am looking forward to a positive response.

Sincerely,
xxxxx

There are actually too many screened information in this presentation for me to give you a useful observation but I will try my best. Remember, my information is incomplete so my advice may or may not be applicable.

I believe that the first 4 paragraphs in the letter are irrelevant to the discussion. These are information that do not aim to support your motivation, but indicates continued learning and training. However, the motivation letter should focus on the driving factors that push you to continue studies abroad. So these paragraphs are not as useful as they you might think they are.

The statements starting at paragraph 5 should be better developed to help explain your motivating factors. Those seem to be the best motivational aspects of your letter.

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Motivation letter for LL.M Program in International Dispute Resolution Program

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Dear Admission Committee,
I am writing to apply for the XX LL.M. program, in which I am enormously interested. The degree from one of the most prestigious and respected universities is my chance to make substantial progress in my personal career and thus contribute significantly to my country's economic development.

The X country's economy is an emerging market whose evolution is highly dependent on investments. During my bachelor's study, I started explorations into investment regulations and discovered that the main challenge investors face in X country is the lack of an investment dispute settlement mechanism. Given that investors want to resolve their disputes without depending upon the courts of the host country, it is essential for X country to establish a trustworthy alternative dispute resolution mechanism to provide fair and equal treatment for all foreign investors.

During my involvement in the "Alternative Dispute Resolution" project financed by the European Union, I discovered my passion for International Dispute Resolution. Throughout this project, I observed an apparent lack of expertise in the field of international arbitration, particularly among local judges, as they perceive investment arbitration as a threat to the State, which also poses another challenge for foreign investors to enforce arbitral awards within the x country's judicial system (according to ICSID statistics, 2 out of 3 arbitral awards in x country do not get enforced by x country's judges).

Furthermore, as the only representative of Young Arbitral Women Practitioners (YAWP) in my country, I have many goals and plans. These include establishing a trustworthy Investor- State Dispute Resolution mechanism in my country, promoting to adopt investor protection legislation to raise awareness among both judges and lawyers, and attracting foreign investors to invest in sustainable projects such as wind turbines and hybrid renewable energy systems.

Moreover, during my bachelor's degree studies at the university, I steadily developed projects on economic development. As a team leader and project manager at AIESEC, the world's largest youth organization, I initiated a project titled "Invest the Future," where young people from different countries come and work in x country's public schools to raise awareness of sustainable projects related to wind and solar energy initiatives.

Since studying at the university, I have also managed to demonstrate leadership potential. I was the captain of a team that participated in the X Arbitration Moot Court Competition. Our team achieved very good results at the regional stage and was chosen to participate in the national round. I highly value this experience as it was my first serious successful management practice.

Coming to my enthusiasm for the international dispute resolution LL.M Program, I have three main incentives. Firstly, an LL.M in international dispute resolution program is crucial for my career growth as I aim to specialize in international investment disputes and work at the International Centre for Settlement of Investment Disputes (ICSID). Secondly, given the lack of awareness of investment dispute arbitration in my country, I will be able to apply some of the knowledge obtained during the International Dispute Resolution program to improve and develop domestic arbitration in my home country.

Thirdly, I believe there will be even more potential growth in the field of investment disputes in the future. Thus, after finishing the program, I plan to organize a module on "Investment Disputes Settlement" at X University in my country, which I strongly believe will encourage many young arbitration enthusiasts to play a role in promoting the use of arbitration and alternative dispute resolution all over the world. Additionally, as a visual student of the IDR LL.M Program, I read an article titled "Investor-State Mediation: Is There A Future?" written by Dr. Tillmann Rudolf Braun, a distinguished Lecturer in the IDR program. Through discussions with program alumnis, I learned that Dr. Braun's lectures include practical examples, case studies, and real-world scenarios to better understand Investor-State Dispute cases, which will undoubtedly allow me to expand my knowledge and expertise and gain a strong academic background in the fields of International Arbitration Law with the goal to specialize in

international investment arbitration.
Moreover, this LL.M. program is the best that offers carefully selected courses in specific areas of arbitration, particularly international investment law. In my view, there is no better means to learn international arbitration than an International Dispute Resolution program delivered not only by highly skilled, outstanding professionals and leading arbitration experts but also by experienced practitioners as guest lecturers as well.

In summary, my previous experience, aspirations and willingness to develop my competence brings me to International Dispute Resolution program at x University, the program best suited to my professional development needs. I am certain that I would be able to have many practical takeaways of the programme and contribute effectively myself.

Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,