Motivation Letter for Swiss Student Visa (International Hospitality Management)

Dear All, I am Applying to a swiss university in Switzerland and need to submit a letter to the Swiss embassy stating why i have chosen to study in Switzerland and what my future plans are. I appreciate your feed back...

Thanks.
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To whom it may concern.

I am Writing to apply for a student visa, to further continue my BSc in International Hospitality Management at Ecole Hoteliere de Lausanne.

The reason I have chosen to complete my education in Switzerland is because of my ambition to develop myself and skills, in the leading country for hospitality, and through the leading school of hospitality; Ecole Hoteliere de Lausanne.

I look forward to taking on new challenges, and take pleasure in interacting and working with people who come from a wide range of backgrounds and cultures, as Ecole Hoteliere de Lausanne offers.

Upon completing my education, I intend to further develop myself and pursue a Masters Degree in Quality Management, to be able to help in the continues improvement of the family business and help maintain our high standards.

Furthermore, I, XXX, promise to be at my best behavior and to abide by the rules and regulations of Switzerland during my period of study at Ecole Hoteliere de Lausanne.

Thank You.

Yours sincerely,

XXXXX
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The reason I have chosen to complete my education in Switzerland, is because of my ambition to develop myself and my skills, in the leading ...

I look forward to taking on new challenges, and take pleasure in interacting and working with people who come from a wide range of backgrounds and cultures, as Ecole Hoteliere de Lausanne offers.---This sentence seems to have something missing, should be revised for clarity.

Upon completing my education, I intend to further develop myself by persuing a Masters Degree in Quality Management, to be able to help in the continuous improvement of the family business and help maintain our high standards.---You should mention what the family business is.

Good luck in school and have fun!!

:)

Thanks "EF_Susan" i really appreciate your reply :)

well the family is in the Hotel Business... its a pretty small property though.. but very equipped, what would be a good way to mention it im having trouble forming the sentence

so far I've got..
improvement of the family business and help maintain our high standards to become the top Hotel providers

but how else could i put it??

Thanks :)

Upon completing my education, I intend to further develop myself and pursue a Masters Degree in Quality Management and help in the continuous improvement of my family's hotel business, maintainint our high standards.

Maybe like that...

:-)