The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC

letter of motivation

Dear Sir/madam,

My name is Dinesh, and I am writing this letter to express my interest to enroll in the Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree program at EUAS. I am currently working as a Web & App Developer. I have achieved my Higher Diploma in Computer Science (Software Engineering and Programming) from Infortec International Asia Campus. I've always dreamed of becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry and thus contributing to the development of my country. I believe that a BSc related to Software Development, which is combined with entrepreneurship skill development would set me miles ahead to reaching my goal.

During my 9 years of experience in the Software development industry, I had a chance to work in the projects from different countries(Australia, UK, India, NewZealand, Netherland) become familiar with several Computer languages, Cloud Technologies, Database Management & Data Security, Client side & Server Side scripting, Web & Mobile application developing and Source controlling.

The main reason I decided to apply to the Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree program at EUAS is my ambition to develop my own business in the software industry. When I look at the course curriculum I found that there are some very important modules for startups like Entrepreneurship, Product Management and Accounting & Budgeting. These modules will help me to understand and practice business concepts during my effort towards my dream. And the rest of the curriculum will help me to update and improve my existing knowledge about software development technologies and other theoretical knowledge. And the other important reason is, this program is the most affordable foreign degree program in a country that has the highest growth in the Information Technology sector. When considering the huge IT growth achieved by Estonia, I think I would be able to observe real world examples on how IT related businesses operate in Estonia.

I hope that I gave you a clear picture of my motives for studying in the Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree program at EUAS and I am eagerly looking forward to joining the course and hope to receive a positive response. I will be happy to provide any further information or documents if required. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
Dinesh

The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student has for taking the course and choosing the university. It should be retained as is. The second paragraph should be removed since it is irrelevant to the motivational presentation. The third paragraph is not as effective as it can be since it is just a rundown of the course subjects with an explanation of the learning expectation, but does not make reference to how these courses relate to the professional motivation of the student. What you want to learn and how it will be applied are two different things. The latter being the motivation behind the decision to enroll in these subjects through this BSc course. There should also be a reference as to why the university, aside from the course itself, was chosen by the student. What personal motivations drove the decision to choose this university? What is the motivation beyond the classroom setting? Expand on the desire to start your own business and how the course will help you achieve this. It appears that you are striving for a continuing education diploma to formalize your field of specialization. That should factor prominently in the decision making. It must be seen throughout the essay rather than just in a single paragraph at the start. The choice of Estonia to study at needs more development. The current presentation does not really show a clear decision making path that would convince the reviewer that you know everything about the course, university, and country you have chosen to study in.