Hello to everyone, I'm applying to work in a foreign country, they asked me to write a Motivation Letter. As English is not my native language, I'm asking for your help in examination my letter.
This is my letter.
01 September 2010
Dear Sir or Madam
I am a graduate student of XXXX University, City, Country. I have been looking for employment in a company involved in the field of Energy or Aviation due to the fact that it is my specialization. I have learnt a lot about Organization before, and this announcement has captured my attention. I would like to express my interest in a full time position as Repair Engineer.
I am specialist in Turbomachinery Power Engineering. My specialization: Aircraft Gas Turbine Engines. I am currently searching for an opportunity to start a career within large company. I possess with extensive knowledge in the field of Turbomachinery from the calculation and design to construction and testing. I speak English fluently. I am looking for a professional practice abroad. I am able to work alone or as a part of a team, and I like working with people. I am flexible and open minded, and if it is needed, I enjoy organizing different tasks. I am able to work hard, and I love the new challenges. I am also eager to learn new things. Also, I would like to learn new languages.
I would like to take part in the work abroad, because this is an excellent opportunity to improve my professional skills and to gain a lot of experiences. I was traveling a lot and spend a lot of time in a foreign countries, that wouldn't be new for me. I think, it would be a perfect start of my career, and I could build up good relationships in my profession, and personal life also. I expect that my educational background and interpersonal skills excellent match with your requirements. I would like to be part of a worldwide organization such as Organization.
Please see my CV for more details.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely Yours, Name
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