Dear Sirs/ Madams,
I am applying for scholarships for the Master's program in Systems, control and mechatronics at Chalmers University, the Letter of Motivation is not specific for any scholarships.
I hope to receive some honest comments on my writing,
Thank you in advance!
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Dear Admission Committee,
I am writing to express my strong interest in the Master's program in Systems, control and mechatronics at Chalmers University. My passion for this field was sparked while watching the 2020 Formula 1 race, where high-performance racing cars rely on dense sensor networks to provide engineering teams with real-time data for control and decision-making. Through further exploration, I realized that many important vehicle states, such as tyre grip or aerodynamic downforce, cannot be directly measured by sensors, but must instead be estimated by combining sensor data with mathematical models. This raised my interest in understanding how state-estimation and control algorithms can ensure fast convergence of estimation errors and reliable real-time performance. This insight led me to pursue a bachelor's degree in Control Engineering and Automation at one of the most prestigious technical universities in my country in this field, where I graduated with a 3.59 CGPA.
My main research focus during that time was the study of consensus behavior in multi-agent systems involving a group of autonomous agents, such as robots or sensors, that start with different initial values and converge to a common value. My final thesis examined double-integrator systems without using velocity measurements to achieve consensus, thereby reducing sensor requirements without compromising efficiency. This aligns well with the world's sustainable development goals regarding green innovations. The list of courses I studied from my Bachelor's degree has prepared me well for the syllabus of the upcoming Master's program, particularly from controlling linear systems to more complex, discrete systems. Given my academic background in control theory and my interest in high-performance vehicle systems, this Master's program at Chalmers University represents a suitable continuation of my studies. When I enroll in this programme, I will participate in the Automatic Control Group to gain advanced theoretical knowledge and practical skills in controlling autonomous vehicles. In response to the fast-growing trend of electric vehicles (EVs) in Vietnam, my proposed master's thesis would focus on multi-sensor systems in autonomous vehicles, with state-estimation and consensus-based control strategies under various constraints to ensure reliable and efficient vehicle operation.
Upon returning to my home country, I plan to become an expert in controlling smart vehicles. By the end of 2026, some big cities in Vietnam are expected to restrict fossil fuel cars, leading to a significant increase in the demand for EVs. This presents an opportunity and a challenge for me as someone who wants to contribute to the field of autonomous vehicles. I plan to collaborate with key autonomous vehicle organizations and apply the advanced skills and insights I gain to address the rapidly growing demand for electric and intelligent transportation systems.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
I am applying for scholarships for the Master's program in Systems, control and mechatronics at Chalmers University, the Letter of Motivation is not specific for any scholarships.
I hope to receive some honest comments on my writing,
Thank you in advance!
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Dear Admission Committee,
I am writing to express my strong interest in the Master's program in Systems, control and mechatronics at Chalmers University. My passion for this field was sparked while watching the 2020 Formula 1 race, where high-performance racing cars rely on dense sensor networks to provide engineering teams with real-time data for control and decision-making. Through further exploration, I realized that many important vehicle states, such as tyre grip or aerodynamic downforce, cannot be directly measured by sensors, but must instead be estimated by combining sensor data with mathematical models. This raised my interest in understanding how state-estimation and control algorithms can ensure fast convergence of estimation errors and reliable real-time performance. This insight led me to pursue a bachelor's degree in Control Engineering and Automation at one of the most prestigious technical universities in my country in this field, where I graduated with a 3.59 CGPA.
My main research focus during that time was the study of consensus behavior in multi-agent systems involving a group of autonomous agents, such as robots or sensors, that start with different initial values and converge to a common value. My final thesis examined double-integrator systems without using velocity measurements to achieve consensus, thereby reducing sensor requirements without compromising efficiency. This aligns well with the world's sustainable development goals regarding green innovations. The list of courses I studied from my Bachelor's degree has prepared me well for the syllabus of the upcoming Master's program, particularly from controlling linear systems to more complex, discrete systems. Given my academic background in control theory and my interest in high-performance vehicle systems, this Master's program at Chalmers University represents a suitable continuation of my studies. When I enroll in this programme, I will participate in the Automatic Control Group to gain advanced theoretical knowledge and practical skills in controlling autonomous vehicles. In response to the fast-growing trend of electric vehicles (EVs) in Vietnam, my proposed master's thesis would focus on multi-sensor systems in autonomous vehicles, with state-estimation and consensus-based control strategies under various constraints to ensure reliable and efficient vehicle operation.
Upon returning to my home country, I plan to become an expert in controlling smart vehicles. By the end of 2026, some big cities in Vietnam are expected to restrict fossil fuel cars, leading to a significant increase in the demand for EVs. This presents an opportunity and a challenge for me as someone who wants to contribute to the field of autonomous vehicles. I plan to collaborate with key autonomous vehicle organizations and apply the advanced skills and insights I gain to address the rapidly growing demand for electric and intelligent transportation systems.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
