Unanswered [5] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Letters   % width Posts: 3

Ultra-Modern Community Center Letter for English Class


sarak32 1 / -  
Sep 10, 2016   #1
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I, and many others on the island, have agreed that an ultra-modern community center is need on Saba. It would make our lives easier. Technology would be at the tip of our fingers, it would keep kids off the streets, and adults would have a place to relax at. It can have things like

• Art studios
• Basketball courts
• Boxing rings
• Dance studios
• Game rooms
• Gymnasiums
• Indoor pools
• Kitchens
• Libraries
• Meeting rooms
These are only a few things that can be included.

TJLuschen - / 241 203  
Sep 11, 2016   #2
Can you share with us what the prompt was for this assignment? I think we are going to need a little more information to be able to give you useful feedback on your response.
dils 20 / 33 2  
Sep 21, 2016   #3
Dear Sara,

In keeping with this letter, here some advices from me.

1. This is important, you need to clearly state in order of what case you write down this latter.

2. You may need to pay attention to sentence cohesion, so that the idea didn't leap.

3. I, and many others on the island,....
Me and many other people on the island,...

You wrote this.
I, and many others on the island, [...] relax at. It can have things like

This is my suggestion.
In this global era, technology is an inevitably important part. Technology will make our life easier and keep our children away from the street life. Related with that, we have agreed that that an ultra-modern community center is need on Saba. However, for the realization, we need some kinds of things, as follow:

• Art studios
• Basketball courts
• Boxing rings
• Dance studios
• Game rooms
• Gymnasiums
• Indoor pools
• Kitchens
• Libraries
• Meeting rooms


Good luck


Home / Letters / Ultra-Modern Community Center Letter for English Class