Dear Mr. Johnson,
I, and many others on the island, have agreed that an ultra-modern community center is need on Saba. It would make our lives easier. Technology would be at the tip of our fingers, it would keep kids off the streets, and adults would have a place to relax at. It can have things like
Art studios
Basketball courts
Boxing rings
Dance studios
Game rooms
Gymnasiums
Indoor pools
Kitchens
Libraries
Meeting rooms
These are only a few things that can be included.
Dear Sara,
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3. I, and many others on the island,....
Me and many other people on the island,...
You wrote this.
I, and many others on the island, [...] relax at. It can have things like
This is my suggestion.
In this global era, technology is an inevitably important part. Technology will make our life easier and keep our children away from the street life. Related with that, we have agreed that that an ultra-modern community center is need on Saba. However, for the realization, we need some kinds of things, as follow:
Art studios
Basketball courts
Boxing rings
Dance studios
Game rooms
Gymnasiums
Indoor pools
Kitchens
Libraries
Meeting rooms
Good luck