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"Dear Mary,
How have you been doing? I'm terribly sorry for my late reply. I'm a little busy with my lessons. I am trying my best to get as many good marks in English as possible. You think that sounds strange, don't you? But my determination is related to one of my most unhappy experiences. Let me tell you about it.
It happened on a Sunday night 2 months ago when I was preparing for my English test. It was 7 p.m and I still had a lot of lessons to learn before taking that test. Then Peter and Ann, my best friends, came. They told me there was a party at Jane's house and they asked me to join them. I enjoy parties so much and I like Jane, too. So I decided to go with them, leaving the lessons behind. At that time, I thought that it was the best decision I had ever made because I really had a lot of fun at Jane's party and didn't regret going there. When I got home, I was too tired to revise my lessons. I went to bed without hesitation.
The morning after was the most terrible time for me. I hadn't revised my lessons yet, so I did the English test badly. I got mark 3 for that test. That was so bad because it was the worst mark I had ever got. I burst to tears right after I received my test back. At this time I really regretted going to Jane's party. If only time could have gone back to the night before!
After school, I went home. When I saw my parents, I felt so ashamed of myself that I couldn't say a word. I promised myself that I would never let anything like this happen. From then on, I always prepare my lessons carefully before school and revise them deeply before taking tests.
What about you? Have you got any unforgettable experience that you would like to share with me? Write to me soon. I'm looking forward hearing from you.
Yours,
Rose"
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Please help me check this letter out.
"Dear Mary,
How have you been doing? I'm terribly sorry for my late reply. I'm a little busy with my lessons. I am trying my best to get as many good marks in English as possible. You think that sounds strange, don't you? But my determination is related to one of my most unhappy experiences. Let me tell you about it.
It happened on a Sunday night 2 months ago when I was preparing for my English test. It was 7 p.m and I still had a lot of lessons to learn before taking that test. Then Peter and Ann, my best friends, came. They told me there was a party at Jane's house and they asked me to join them. I enjoy parties so much and I like Jane, too. So I decided to go with them, leaving the lessons behind. At that time, I thought that it was the best decision I had ever made because I really had a lot of fun at Jane's party and didn't regret going there. When I got home, I was too tired to revise my lessons. I went to bed without hesitation.
The morning after was the most terrible time for me. I hadn't revised my lessons yet, so I did the English test badly. I got mark 3 for that test. That was so bad because it was the worst mark I had ever got. I burst to tears right after I received my test back. At this time I really regretted going to Jane's party. If only time could have gone back to the night before!
After school, I went home. When I saw my parents, I felt so ashamed of myself that I couldn't say a word. I promised myself that I would never let anything like this happen. From then on, I always prepare my lessons carefully before school and revise them deeply before taking tests.
What about you? Have you got any unforgettable experience that you would like to share with me? Write to me soon. I'm looking forward hearing from you.
Yours,
Rose"
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