Dear Chris,
cc: Guil and Joel
I'm writing this e-mail to you, because I would like to thank you for hiring me and be part of your company.
Saying that I was very surprise of the manner that it was handle by your company upon my termination, do to the fact that you hired me and Guil.
The way that Jennifer "Controller" terminated me is was the lowest I ever experience in my life working for a company.
I work for you, for five months and I think that during does months I would imaged that you knew what kind of person I'm. [..]
Message:
Dear Chris,
cc: Guil and Joel
Hello, my edits and suggestions are below:
I'm writing this e-mail to you, because I would like to thank you for hiring me and to be (a) part of your company.
Saying that(,) I was very surprise(d) of (in)the manner that ( this situation) was handle(ed) by your company upon my termination. do to the fact that You hired me and Guil GuIl and I. The way that Jennifer "Controller" terminated me is was the lowest I ever experience in my life working for a company.
I work(ed) for you for five months and I think that during does(those) months I would imaged (Imagined) that you knew what kind of person I'm I am.
The reason( that was given) why I was Terminated for termination by your company was "Lack of Sufficient Progress", I don't (do not) think that was a good reason to terminated me do due to the fact that if, of, I was terminate do to "Lack of Sufficient Progress."
thenmy )(In my opinion) you should (have) Terminated Jennifer, Cindy, Yolanda, Soraya and Robbie. I hear(d) a lot many of things while I was there! the A Lady who came to work for one day, she asked me if Nikki it was the Owner of the company and I told her, "no she's Not" and I thin in my option opinion she was very smart to realize that Jennifer depends on Nikki. Every day she would come and asked Nikki how to do something, but Nikki is very smart person(who choses not to say)much because she wants to be and charge of everything. Guil and Jennifer told me to ask Nikki everything before I did anything Which I did (because) she was my boss, not Guil, not Joel (nor) Jennifer. and I think that I was the victim of something that I was unprepared to handed. (handle)
I worked for ABC Supply for 6 years, and I (am) still friends with everyone there. I don't ever recall saying anything negated about any company that I ever work(ed) for, because to me that (is) bad business. I did my job while I work(ed) (for) ABC, (and) other suppliers did not like me because of the fact that I go I received some of their business.
Chis, I learn(ed) a lot of your system while I was an employee of your company. and I think I learn to much that I wish I wouldn't . There's a lot of things going on there that I don't (do not) think you would be happy about,(but) I guess you will realize one day. Some of the employee(s) that you have in your company have been fire(d) because they were stilling(stealing?) from a previous job.
Hello, I have added some suggestions above to help your letter,try not to capitalize any words except names and titles. A complaint letters to get a good point across should be fact based and to the point, I see you use some of those techniques here. Good luck!