Letter writed for responding a request (magazine subscription)

You recently subscribe to a new magazine. A representative of the magazine has asked you to give some feedback on their magazine.

Write a letter to him/her that includes the following information:

+ details of why you bought the magazine
+ what you liked about the latest edition
+ any improvement you would recommend
WRITE AT LEAST 150 WORDS

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regards to express my feeling about one of your latest magazines. I believe that you are on the right track when asking for customers' thoughts about your recently released publication.

Honestly, the reason why I decided to buy the magazine was its gorgeous cover and beneficial details. The title was typed in an outstanding font and frankly conveyed the main content in it. Basicly, that magazine's tages were truly servered my demand at that time.

One of the things I like the most is its information that writers put in, which was extremely practical and useful. In addition to that, not only the content but also the images illustrated did impress my visual sense. I suppose that the cleverness in selecting and matching each image to the topic played an important part in boosting the number of its readerships.

In my opinion, there was no fault in your product, it was completely perfect. I suggest that you should keep producing more magazines with multiple topics and concentrate on progressing the quality of content day by day.

I hope that my comments and recommendations would help you somehow.
Your faithfully,
Hannah Jamson.

I would appreciate any time and attention that teachers pay to my writing as well as helping me to fix any mistakes I made

The letter is too general in specifics. Yes, you responded to each prompt instruction, but the letter itself was not as informative as it should be. The letter could have been more informative and prompt responsive if say, you pretended that you were actually writing to a magazine that you enjoy reading (Vogue, National Geographic, Time magazine, Cosmopolitan, Newsweek, Good House Keeping). That way your letter would have had more relevant content and you could have had a more personal response to the letter writing instructions.

There are some parts of the letter that are unclear to the reader. Specifically this section:

Basicly, that magazine's tages were truly servered my demand at that time.

Spelling errors (Basicly = Basically), words that the examiner cannot guess the correct word for (tages), and words that don't seem to truly make any sense (servered) would definitely pull down your LR, GRA, C&C scores and could very well have contributed to a failing mark for this Task 1 writing test.