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research paper on police mental health

2 - The paper is very interesting. The men in blue truly face mental challenges every day that they work for...

Research Papersmsalido - Mar 22, 2025 / Holt - 1 day ago
ENG 102 Research Paper -- Privacy In Today's Digital World

2 - I feel like there is an idea or representation of a subject missing in this sentence. It is...

Research Paperspswizzle - Mar 21, 2025 / Holt - Mar 22, 2025
Research about the effects of high drug prices

2 - This is a sweeping statement that is not based on facts. Or, you might have the facts for...

Research PapersMEGmeghan - Mar 17, 2025 / Holt - Mar 22, 2025
Youth sports specialization - research paper

2 - This is redundant. Just say infrequently. Do not make it a habit to close a paragraph with...

Research Paperssamueljohnson12 - Mar 16, 2025 / Holt - Mar 17, 2025
Artificial Intelligence in Medical Diagnosis: Innovations, Ethical Challenges, and Future Directions

2 - It is extremely difficult to read this paper due the non formatted presentation. I cannot tell if the paper...

Research PapersYIK2159115 - Mar 9, 2025 / Holt - Mar 13, 2025
Ending the murdering of innocent children

2 - You cannot use a citation to open your presentation. The introduction in the first paragraph should be reference...

Research PapersSuccessful1 - Feb 24, 2025 / Holt - Feb 27, 2025
Argument research paper: Community Fluoridated Water and Policy Reform

2 - The research paper effectively transmits the researched information to the readers. However, merely delivering this information is not enough....

Research PapersPayne186 - Feb 5, 2025 / Holt - Feb 6, 2025
Fossil fuels are killing our planet - ENG 102 MLA format

2 - I think it would be best not to assume that the reader is automatically familiar with the effects of...

Research PapersDevon1542 - Jan 21, 2025 / Holt - Jan 21, 2025
The Immoral Implications of Animal Testing and its Necessity in the Advancement of Medicine

2 - I am not sure what paper format you are supposed to be using for this paper. The way that...

Research Papersprincess23 - Jan 18, 2025 / Holt - Jan 19, 2025
Peer review needed. Research paper on school shootings

2 - While it was nice to read the story that you narrated at the beginning, it did not establish the...

Research PapersDacgol - Jan 17, 2025 / Holt - Jan 18, 2025
Essay on The Role of Renewable Energy in Climate Change

2 - The research paper contains relevant and up to date information. It is informative for the most part and does...

Research PapersJeremiah17 - Jan 2, 2025 / Holt - Jan 3, 2025
The Dual Crisis of Gun Violence and Rights: A Mutual Understanding

2 - The first edit you have to make to this research paper is in the introduction + thesis statement. You...

Research PapersJES2172453 - Dec 29, 2024 / Holt - Dec 29, 2024
The Severity of Climate Change and is it Opinion or Fact

2 - The title is not grammatically correct nor properly formatted as a title. You could probably try to say...

Research Papersserenitykm - Dec 26, 2024 / Holt - Dec 26, 2024
Final Essay: Anti-LGBTQ Laws being instated (Research paper)

2 - I feel like the essay is too broad in terms of field of discussion. It has to be narrowed...

Research PapersJadynAkerRio - Dec 21, 2024 / Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Growing Mental Health Crisis in Teenagers

2 - Please change the reference point to "mental illness among teens". The reference currently being used is incorrect. Good...

Research Papersadieringer407 - Dec 7, 2024 / Holt - Dec 9, 2024
Green Rush: Exploring the Economic and Societal Impacts of Cannabis Legalization

2 - Each of these considerations should be given their own proper highlight in stand alone paragraphs. You cannot lump...

Research Papersraaugustine - Dec 7, 2024 / Holt - Dec 9, 2024
The Fifth Circuit Court Decision on United States v Smith

2 - The thesis statement was immediately presented in the first paragraph of the essay without any regard for a...

Research Papersric2221474 - Nov 26, 2024 / Holt - Nov 27, 2024
Legal Abortion with Limits: Balancing Choice and Responsibility

2 - The essay needs to have a more interesting backgrounder. The issue of abortion must be presented from both sides...

Research Papersmichelesull - Nov 24, 2024 / Holt - Nov 25, 2024
Research Paper Families with Disabilities Support

2 - Since there are several forms of disability that exist among children, the essay should do one of two...

Research PapersAVS05 - Nov 24, 2024 / Holt - Nov 24, 2024
The Importance of the MMR Vaccine in Public Health

2 - Since this is an introduction to the MMR line of vaccines, the introduction needs to be historical in context....

Research PapersmichelleAmathers - Nov 23, 2024 / Holt - Nov 24, 2024
Effects of High Prescription drug Prices in the U.S.

2 - Too much space in the paper was dedicated to the history of the high cost of prescription drugs. While...

Research Papersnadia123 - Nov 21, 2024 / Holt - Nov 21, 2024
Combating Bullying in Schools

2 - The content of this section is purely hypothetical. There needs to be a sense of how this type...

Research Papersaguerrero16 - Nov 11, 2024 / Holt - Nov 13, 2024
The Rise of Automation and Its Impact on Job Opportunities for the Working Class

2 - The essay does not feel like it has a beginning. That all too important introduction + thesis statement is...

Research Papersrioasment - Nov 8, 2024 / Holt - Nov 10, 2024
critically discuss how considering colonialism helps you to deepen your understandings of evolutions

2 - I am not sure about what you are trying to accomplish here. Are you supposed to be doing only...

Research PapersWildXst - Nov 7, 2024 / Holt - Nov 10, 2024
Reserach on The Role The United States Has In The Palestinian Genocide

3 - @Holt Thank you so much will take you advise move forward with my next draft have a wonderful day...

Research Papersd1360 - Nov 2, 2024 / d1360 - Nov 2, 2024
Research paper on Fish Hatcheries

2 - It is best to assume that the reader is not familiar with the topic you are discussing at...

Research Paperstsherbourne - Nov 2, 2024 / Holt - Nov 2, 2024
The Right to Choose - Abortion Research Paper

3 - the last two paragraphs should be combined they both seem like they are building to a conclusion, but it...

Research Papersjsbenne822 - Nov 1, 2024 / tsherbourne - Nov 2, 2024
Quality Communication Can Improve Patient-Centered Health Outcomes Among Older Adults

2 - It is not customary for a research paper to begin by immediately presenting researched information in the introductory paragraph....

Research Paperscboykin - Sep 15, 2024 / Holt - Sep 16, 2024
APA format essay, topic: Maternal mortality rates for black women

2 - This is a notable and historical event that should be narrated at the beginning of the research to...

Research Papersjentamp - Aug 28, 2024 / Holt - Aug 29, 2024
Is Culinary School a Worthwhile Investment for Young Individuals Entering the Field?

2 - Offer a comparative analysis of the fees associated with culinary school at this point. Use the most expensive...

Research Papersash112233445566 - Aug 28, 2024 / Holt - Aug 28, 2024
Free Take Home Naloxone is not a moral dilemma, but an evidenced based life saving measure.

2 - It is best to avoid rhetorical questions when writing your introduction. Keep the focus on the information you are...

Research Papersgen2143524 - Aug 19, 2024 / Holt - Aug 20, 2024
How does the United States political climate impact the stock market?

2 - The first 2 paragraphs are very strong in terms of explanation. You are obviously familiar with the political climate...

Research Papersanibabic - Aug 13, 2024 / Holt - Aug 14, 2024
"Social Media's Dangerous Link to Disordered Eating"

3 - One thing that's obvious is offering possible solutions as stated by Holt. A nother thing is. instead of outrightly...

Research Paperssamavis - Aug 9, 2024 / Uzor - Aug 12, 2024
Addiction and Substance Abuse

2 - 1. The research paragraphs should not end with in-text citations. These references must have additional discussions included. The insight...

Research PapersJlentz13 - Aug 4, 2024 / Holt - Aug 4, 2024
Registration of a paper in an identified academic field?

2 - It is customary to ask that the writer or researcher register in one academic field just to give yourself...

Research PapersLililo - Jul 28, 2024 / Holt - Jul 28, 2024
The Impact of the Cost of Food on Obesity in the US

2 - The research paper seems to be a mix n match of information, without any proper direction. You may wish...

Research PapersWilliam2025 - Jul 23, 2024 / Holt - Jul 26, 2024
ENG102 Research Paper - Dog Breeds and why it's Important That you Choose the Right Breed!

2 - You need to follow the correct MLA formatting in specific instances for the research paper. The fault of your...

Research Paperskhowdyy2088750 - Jul 21, 2024 / Holt - Jul 24, 2024
DSM-5 (Depressive Disorder) English 102 research essay

2 - The first paragraph is always the introduction to the topic. That is the place where you can give a...

Research Papersamarieonn - Jul 20, 2024 / Holt - Jul 20, 2024
The prison industrial complex and the effects on minorities

2 - You are discussing modern slavery in the form of illegal immigrapht prisoners right? You should establish that right from...

Research Paperslegarretacesar - Jul 19, 2024 / Holt - Jul 19, 2024
why you should leave everything and move to the beach!

2 - I seem to read a contradiction in this presentation. You are discussing living by the beach right? Living by...

Research Papersjamz - Jul 15, 2024 / Holt - Jul 17, 2024
Moving Toward Zero Waste Research Essay

2 - What exactly are you referring to here? You need to properly introduce example to your reader by way...

Research Paperslcolon - Jul 15, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
The Mental Affects Of The Pandemic Were Worse Than The Actual Illness Itself

2 - Why not consider indicating that the Corona virus lockdown created 2 instead of just 1 pandemic? One is...

Research PapersANG2405743 - Jul 13, 2024 / Holt - Jul 15, 2024
Anxiety VS College Students first draft

2 - Maybe consider focusing on the audience for the research paper and the pool from which the test results will...

Research Papersisabella05 - Jun 15, 2024 / Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Research Paper on Rape Culture

2 - The paper over uses the word rape. It removes the importance of the word in the overall presentation. Try...

Research Papersbanana18 - May 16, 2024 / Holt - May 17, 2024
Persuasive Research Essay Petitioning Against Street Circuits on the F1 Race Calendar - Review

2 - Personally, I believe that you have written this paper more for people who already have a background and knowledge...

Research PapersJDMoyer - May 12, 2024 / Holt - May 17, 2024
The Nostalgic Memories Linked by Smell - research paper review for english paper

2 - The research paper is good. However, the chronological order for the information presentation can be improved. Try to consider...

Research Papersjayde777 - May 4, 2024 / Holt - May 9, 2024
our contribution to air pollution

2 - I believe that you are presenting a research paper outline with this presentation. Am I right? If so, then...

Research PapersAmiles4508 - Apr 27, 2024 / Holt - May 4, 2024
Family interventions are best when finding ways to help a child impacted by parental substance abuse

2 - The introduction of the topic is missing in this research paper. You cannot start the paper with immediate information...

Research Paperssammimhmrio - Apr 27, 2024 / Holt - May 3, 2024
A persuasive essay topic on why its best to prioritize a healthy lifestyle

2 - This is a rhetorical question that would have been best placed at the end of the introductory paragraph....

Research Papersaspenswick - Apr 21, 2024 / Holt - Apr 21, 2024
Going with EV electric cars - resarch paper

2 - You cannot make vague references in a research paper. The model, year of release, and reasons for the...

Research PapersCorey Z - Apr 9, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The Potential of Artificial Intelligence in Healthcare - AI Persuasive Research Essay for ENG102

2 - The presentation can do with a better introduction. It is important to look at the historical problems of healthcare...

Research Papersceene - Apr 8, 2024 / Holt - Apr 19, 2024
There is not a First without the Second

2 - The main problem that I see with this paper is that a Works Cited page was created at the...

Research PapersBokalau12 - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Potential fertility risks of Lipo 360 surgery for women of childbearing age

2 - I believe that your introduction to Lipo360 is incomplete. You have to explain what the procedure is about, even...

Research PapersKmirage - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Mar 31, 2024
Research on TikTok's negative effects on Adolescents

2 - Do not open the presentation with a citation. That is the worst thing that you can do in a...

Research PapersAlexNorrish - Mar 23, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Misclassified cases of sudden infant death syndrome research paper - looking for 3 weaknesses

2 - The main weakness that I see in this paper is your over reliance on in-text citations to complete the...

Research PapersBuchbritt95 - Mar 23, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Research paper on relationship between Antarctic plants and climate change - peer review

2 - There should not be 2 paragraphs for the introduction and thesis statement. That creates a tremendously long, but sometimes...

Research PapersTartrion - Mar 23, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
The Dark Legacy of Christopher Columbus: Exploitation, Violence, and Cultural Devastation

2 - Correct this to indicate that he is seen as a stain on the Taino community. He is not...

Research Papersjheyg17 - Mar 20, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Nuclear Energy

2 - The research paper had a very clear start and offered an exciting promise for the information to be presented....

Research Papersbamzooks - Mar 2, 2024 / Holt - Mar 6, 2024
Mindful Resilience: Integrating Mindfulness into Daily Life for Enhanced Well-Being

2 - Information sources in this research paper is too old to be considered valid for the purpose it is meant...

Research Paperssartztmcmahon - Jan 2, 2024 / Holt - Jan 9, 2024
Red Meat is a Healthy Dieting Staple - Draft Proposal Essay

2 - The introduction is good, but where is the thesis statement and problem statement? You need to create a better...

Research Papersbrandon6915 - Dec 17, 2023 / Holt - Dec 17, 2023

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