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(ETHICAL CORRUPTION OF FEDERAL JUDGES) Help creating a Thesis statement



cupcake1110 1 / -  
Apr 17, 2012   #1
Hello, everyone I am new to this an was wondering if i could get some of your opinons and help on my research paper .
I am writting about the corruption of federal judges throughout the eastcoast I am supposed to come up with a Thesis statement and i am a bit puzzled at trying to find a good one .

here is what i have so far

ETHICAL CORRUPTION OF FEDERAL JUDGES HAS SPREAD THROUGHOUT THE EASTCOAST.

ANY SUGESTIONS PLEASE HELP

Mimo 1 / 2  
Apr 18, 2012   #2
A thesis statement should point at what you will say in the next paragraphs and the examples you will use. I think your thesis statement is already good. You can also use this as your thesis if you are going to discuss particular examples later on in your essay: " as obvious in many countries in the eastcoast, including ... and ...., ethical corruption of federal judges is so widespread and detrimrntal to the countries."


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