cupcake1110 1 / - Apr 17, 2012 #1Hello, everyone I am new to this an was wondering if i could get some of your opinons and help on my research paper .I am writting about the corruption of federal judges throughout the eastcoast I am supposed to come up with a Thesis statement and i am a bit puzzled at trying to find a good one .here is what i have so farETHICAL CORRUPTION OF FEDERAL JUDGES HAS SPREAD THROUGHOUT THE EASTCOAST.ANY SUGESTIONS PLEASE HELP
Mimo 1 / 2 Apr 18, 2012 #2A thesis statement should point at what you will say in the next paragraphs and the examples you will use. I think your thesis statement is already good. You can also use this as your thesis if you are going to discuss particular examples later on in your essay: " as obvious in many countries in the eastcoast, including ... and ...., ethical corruption of federal judges is so widespread and detrimrntal to the countries."