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Technologies have immensely facilitated our life. However, it has some shortcomings.


Vns9x 102 / 236 16  
Oct 27, 2014   #1
Technology makes people's lives simpler rather than more complicated.

Technologies have immensely facilitated our life. However, it has some shortcomings. This essay will explore the way technologies facilitate, and in parallel, insignificantly ruin our life.

There are many technologies such as Internet, robot, has changed our life. In terms Internet, it provides us with numerous information. In fact, you can easily access to any information. Consequently, there are endless knowledge awaiting for you on the Internet. Furthermore, it is extremely fast to gather anything through the Internet. Nevertheless, Internet gives you the opportunity to communicate with your relatives and siblings who live at the end of the map. Of course, you can keep in touch with them by phone. However, it is quite expensive. With Internet, especially with the unlimited one, you can converse by Skype or others programs for free with anybody on this planet. When it comes to Robot, eventually, it can substitute lazy human worker. It does not necessitate to sleep or ask for a favor. Robot do not need to have any vacation. Therefore, it is more fruitful comparing to the typical worker. To clarify it, imagine if you had to select between a human worker who always complaining about his salary, demanding for the vacation. And the robot, which can work more effectively than the human worker. Furthermore, it does not require any of those listed such as vacation and salary. Obviously, your most likely choice is going to be the robot.

Unfortunately, that is the point when technologies cause problem for us. We commence to rely on those technologies more and more. It can lead us to abundance of diseases such as obesity or cancer and so on. However, I believe that if we intended to solve the issue then it can be fixed easily.

Aforementioned reasons examine that technologies have made a leading impact on us, on our society. Even though, there are quite a number of drawbacks. However, the advantages overwhelm the disadvantages. Hence, technologies have greatly make our life easier.

Shon Do - please remember about descriptive, quaint title, and don't put to big useless space between description and essay

Remansou 8 / 23 9  
Oct 27, 2014   #2
There are many technologies such as Internet, robot, has changed our life. In terms Internet, it provides us with numerous information

There are many technologies such as Internet, robot, has changed our life. In terms Internet, it provides us with numerous information.

I think the above should be rewritten this way:
There are many technologies such as the Internet and robots that has changed our life. In terms of the Internet, it provides....
Good luck!
dumbnerd123 3 / 11  
Oct 27, 2014   #3
Try to keep the plural/singular forms consistent. Also try to vary the structure of your sentences; you started a majority of them with adverbs.


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