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Thesis Statement about the State of Hawaii (history, economy, population, local gov)



kamashack 1 / -  
Dec 15, 2010   #1
I need help with a thesis statement about the State of Hawaii. My research paper covers the history, economy, population, and it's local government. I've started writing my research paper but I'm stuck on a good thesis.

thanks in advance,
Kama Shack

EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Dec 21, 2010   #2
It's all about he timing. If you write all the body paragraphs, and you are writing paragraps abut a lot of great articles you have found, you will soon be ready to come up with a very meaningful observation about Hawaii.

In fact, you cannot help coming up with one. If you write paragraphs about the main ideas of 5 or 10 articles, you cannot help noticing something interesting about the culture on those islands.

When you notice something interesting, a concept that the articles make you think of, you can write out it at the end of the first paragraph.

Then, go back and revise the body paragraphs so that they all highlight that main idea, that thing you noticed.

:-)


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