Hi,
I am applying for a schoraship to study Sports management in the UK. As such I need help editing a response to the following essay question. ( word limit 300. My response goes to 327 words). Also have I addressed the essay question correctly? Deadline is 8th of May. Please help...
-[b]Please explain your ambitions and career plan. ( 300 words)[/b]
AS a professional athlete who played the game of Cricket at a good level, I always felt that for India to become a sporting giant, we needed a paradigm shift in the way we looked at Sport. This is what inspired me to pursue a career in sport, going beyond just being a player on the field. Put simply, my ambition is to "Change the way sport is played in our country". And to achieve this, the key areas that I wish to make an impact on are as follows:
1.Create a sporting Culture: - Sport is not only about medals. It teaches us how to compete, learn how to win and lose. In fact sport teaches values more than textbooks in a class room. Hence sport should be an integral part of education. As part of my current job with a company which focuses on Sport in education, I have seen how the right kind of training can create a love for sport among the youth.
2.Develop the Business of Sport:- One of the main reasons I wish to study Sport management is understanding how to monetise sport. I firmly believe that the success of Europe and America in sport comes from the fact that they have a successful sports industry. How do successful franchises and leagues function? This is what I want to learn and put that learning into practice.
3.Bring professionalism in sport training:- Sports coaching in India still follows the subjective teaching methodology. There is no scientific progression in it and this affects training and performance. Post my training in the Sciences and technology of Coaching held at the AISTS Academy (set up by the IOC) in Switzerland, I realised what a huge impact sports science has on the performance of elite athletes. Hence , I would continue to strive hard towards bringing such know-how and incorporate them in the way we train our athletes to create champions in sport.
I am applying for a schoraship to study Sports management in the UK. As such I need help editing a response to the following essay question. ( word limit 300. My response goes to 327 words). Also have I addressed the essay question correctly? Deadline is 8th of May. Please help...
-[b]Please explain your ambitions and career plan. ( 300 words)[/b]
AS a professional athlete who played the game of Cricket at a good level, I always felt that for India to become a sporting giant, we needed a paradigm shift in the way we looked at Sport. This is what inspired me to pursue a career in sport, going beyond just being a player on the field. Put simply, my ambition is to "Change the way sport is played in our country". And to achieve this, the key areas that I wish to make an impact on are as follows:
1.Create a sporting Culture: - Sport is not only about medals. It teaches us how to compete, learn how to win and lose. In fact sport teaches values more than textbooks in a class room. Hence sport should be an integral part of education. As part of my current job with a company which focuses on Sport in education, I have seen how the right kind of training can create a love for sport among the youth.
2.Develop the Business of Sport:- One of the main reasons I wish to study Sport management is understanding how to monetise sport. I firmly believe that the success of Europe and America in sport comes from the fact that they have a successful sports industry. How do successful franchises and leagues function? This is what I want to learn and put that learning into practice.
3.Bring professionalism in sport training:- Sports coaching in India still follows the subjective teaching methodology. There is no scientific progression in it and this affects training and performance. Post my training in the Sciences and technology of Coaching held at the AISTS Academy (set up by the IOC) in Switzerland, I realised what a huge impact sports science has on the performance of elite athletes. Hence , I would continue to strive hard towards bringing such know-how and incorporate them in the way we train our athletes to create champions in sport.