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Need your assistance - (reasons for receiving the scholarship)



tabularasa 1 / -  
Apr 20, 2008   #1
Our family moved to Moscow in 1991 because my father (as one of the best students in Kazakhstan) was forwarded here to continue his postgraduate study. At that time it seemed impossible to believe that I would be able to achieve a higher education in the best Russian university, and nevertheless my dream came true. But now at 21, I can say there's one thing I'm sure of - receiving this scholarship will be the defining moment in my education that will change my whole life.

Study abroad is too expensive, so in my case the scholarship becomes a unique and the only chance to improve significantly the knowledge gained at Moscow State Institute of International Relations, acquire practical experience in a large financial centre and study in the university famous for its rich traditions. But above all, it is the people that make the University, so studying at Edinburgh will allow me to tap into a network of past and future scholars and I will be able to get acquainted with and learn from so many amazing student leaders in finance and investment.

This postgraduate program will not only promote my academic enrichment and personal growth but also enhance the career prospects. People who study abroad tend to be willing to take risks, or put themselves in unusual situations, be able to solve problems under unique circumstances, and be able to overcome the fear of the unknown. This is what employers seek and this is what only international education can give me. Nowadays Russia is experiencing the historical moment of its development, so the new knowledge acquired at Edinburgh will be a great contribution to its economic wealth.

Abroad you learn many things about not only life but yourself as well, experience a culture different from your own, appreciate a different way of life and meet people that you may have never met. I strongly believe that this exciting opportunity will allow me to gain once-in-a-lifetime experiences with lasting memories.

But most importantly, this scholarship is more than a fiscal currency; instead it is a ticket to achieve my goals that will allow me to change the very essence of myself for the better.

EF_Team2 1 / 1703  
Apr 21, 2008   #2
Greetings!

Yes, I think the changes make the paragraphs read more smoothly. I have only one suggestion:

instead it is a ticket to achieve my goals that will allow me to change the very essence of myself for the better. - Your closing thoughts might leave more of a lasting impression if you broke this sentence up. How about: "instead, it is a ticket to achieve my goals. A scholarship to [name of university] will allow me to change the very essence of myself for the better". That's my opinon, anyway. ;-)

I truly hope you will receive your scholarship and enjoy your life at university. I'm glad if I have helped!

Sarah
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hksoni2003 - / 1  
Jul 4, 2012   #3
[Moved from]: want help in writing reasons for applying for fellowship

I am applying for an post-doctoral fellowship and they asked me to write the reasons for applying for this fellowship. the major reason is the funding but want to write something sounds good.
ah_zafari [Contributor] 40 / 661  
Jul 4, 2012   #4
Hi, you should write about your interests and your research area. Why you want to do a research through the offered post-doc position. U can also write about the university that you are going to apply for. How did u become familiar with this university? Why did u choose this university? Talk about the facilities and academic atmosphere of the university. U can also talk about your educational and professional experiences and connect them to the post-doc position.

Good luck
Ahmad
carpenoctem - / 2  
Mar 23, 2013   #5
Reasons why I'm applying Scholarship - Need your inputs to start writing

I have to write a 200 words essay about my self, my motivation, reasons why Im applying this scholarship, explain how I would expect to benefit the award provides, and describe how I might contribute during my time there.

could you guys please help me how to write it in only 200 words? thank you in advance for your help!
temptprovidence 8 / 162  
Mar 23, 2013   #6
please tell the scholarship kind you need. i mean in which field... then i can be helpful anyway.. same with others. !! :)
carpenoctem - / 2  
Mar 23, 2013   #7
I plan to take International relation as my major. :)


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