"Attending Texas Woman's University, Biology" - Goals And Aspirations

the topic: As you enter another phase of your life, share your goals and aspirations.

Dont worry so much about the spelling but here it goes

I can not wish for my last year of high school to be over any faster! I already have my goals and plans for college set out! I have been planning out my next phase in life since my sophomore year. Like many other high school seniors I am excited to experience the college life. With Numerous months of researching I found that attending Texas Woman's University will best suit me in my pursuit of becoming a dental hygienist. I plan to study Biology at TWU .I plan to attend college full time(at least 12 hours per semester) while working a part time job. I plan to put my best effort into my classes to be able to get in to the dental hygiene program with no hesistattion. After I graduate from Texas Woman's University with an Associates in Biology. I am going to apply to the Dental Hygiene Program at TWU. .When i graduate from Texas Woman's University Dental hygiene program I plan to work as a Dental Hygienist at a dental clinic in the Dallas/Fort worth area. I also aspire to have a comfortable amount of money. I also want a family; a husband and a child.

it sounds very repetitive...i plan i plan...i plan...i need help with that lol

I have been planning out the next phase of my life since my sophomore year.

Like many other high school seniors I am excited to experience the college life.

With numerous--small 'n' on 'numerous'.

... months of researching I found that attending Texas...

I plan to study Biology at TWU .

I plan to ---you could change this to, "I want to..."

attend college full time(at least 12 hours per semester) while working a part time job.

I plan towill put my best effort into my classes to be able to get into the dental hygiene program with no hesistation .

After I graduate from Texas Woman's University with an Associates in Biology, I am going to apply to...

I also aspire to have a comfortable amount of money. I also want a family; a husband and a child. --You don't need these last two sentences, they detract from your essay. Good luck in school and have fun!

:)

thanks!!