Who I am and background? Study plan for master's scholarship

Who I am and background?

Most Respectfully,
My Name is Ammara Rasheed from Pakistan. I live in Rawalpindi which is the most popular city of Pakistan. I have completed my "Bachelor of Computer Science" from Post Graduate College which is sub campus of university of gujrat. It was 4 years degree program which mainly focuses on Software development. I am among top 5 students in my program at my university. I have secured 3.55 CGPA out of 4.00. I am always a regular, punctual, hopeful and hardworking student. There was a time when I didn't like studying and just hated going school but as some incidents may change a person's life entirely, something that happens to me when I was fail in all major subjects in class 8 and I saw my father crying in his room solitary due to my bad result as he just wanted to see me educated. He left his family and village to get education and shifted to city in his childhood. My love for him is myriad. His tears had profound effect on my heart and mind. Therefore, I restricted my desires to education and getting education became my life's only dream and I am glad to know that how life plans all these things for me and made me a hardworking person.

My undergraduate degree program has exposed me to a wide range of courses like Artificial Intelligence, Android development, Information Security, Data Communication and Networks, Data Structure, Web Development, Operating System, Computer Networks and Digital Image Processing and Computer Vision.

I Love to:
·spend time with friends and family
·work with class mates to learn new things
·work with true efforts and dedications
·meet and greet new people from different cultures and different backgrounds
·face challenges

one essay topic at one time, please

@AmmaraRasheed
bro please clarify what are you writing for?
I mean what is this?
if you are writing the personal statement, it should be more clear about your achievements especially academic awards and gaining.

@Ali163
I am writing study plan for china.

I use this website first time. I uploaded full study plan but now it is 3rd part of it.

Your introduction essay should not focus so much on your weaknesses as a student. Neither should it relate too much personal information. Rather, it should only give an overview of your family dynamic, skim over any academic failures, highlight your academic accomplishments, and show why you developed an interest in your current course. The bullet points don't help because these lack explanations in relation to your academic goals. Try to write a statement that intertwines your personal information with your academic goals. That way you can present a well-rounded idea as to who you are as a person, student, and professional. Try not be overly dramatic as well. This essay is running high on emotion and less on information. It is the information presentation, without the dramatics, that matter the most to the reviewer.