What are your career plans and how might they be consistent or contribute to mission of the program

The scholarship program was created to provide students from target communities with scholarship assistance to attend a NC college or university and hopefully encourage them to return home or to a similar rural community to pursue a career and give back to the community.

My goal is to incorporate myself in the field of Mechanical Engineering. I always considered Mechanical Engineering interesting and have been greatly inspired by the times I've worked with relation to the field. I recently helped out someone on two cars. As we were peaking inside of the vehicles we could see the apparatus of the cars changing into a computerized module based machine from an older to a newer model. An example of innovation in the automobile industry is variable valve timing.

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Hi,
here are my recommendations.
Instead of My goal is to incorporate myself
My goal is to involve myself.
I always considered Mechanical Engineering interesting and have been greatly inspired by the times I've worked with relation to the field.
I have always taken an interest in mechanical engineering and the times I've work in_____
You have to be more detailed when you say "that relations to the field."
I recently helped out someone on two cars
While recently helping someone on two cars I examined...
hope that helps.

Your scholarship essay needs to embody a specific goal or ambition that you have for your community that relates to your chosen profession. Think about the field of mechanical engineering and then look at the needs of your community with regards to that aspect. How do you believe majoring in that course will help your community? Develop a tentative or solid plan / idea as to how you can participate in enriching the lives of your community members upon your graduation. This could be through the transfer of knowledge by training the members of your community in certain aspects of the work that they can do without attending formal schooling, or perhaps your setting up a small to medium scale enterprise that can employ the jobless in your area. Whatever it is you choose to decide, the scholarship wants to make sure that you will give back to your community in a way that will honor the scholarship foundation that sponsored your own studies. Think of it this way, how can you pay it forward? Then you have the relevant and important answer to the prompt :-)