To change the world, even just a little, has always been a desire of mine. Goals essay 250 words

Prompt: Describe your educational and career goals and explain what or who has inspired or helped shape these goals
Max is 250 words
Currently at 249

To change the world, even just a little has always been a desire of mine. Most kids my age let themselves be bothered by texts, relationships, realty TV, the Kardahsians... For me it was different. For me it was injustice and suffering that got to my core, that enraged me. It was not until I discovered my passion for science and engineering that I realized that maybe I could do something about it.

I realized that my 4 years of self-teaching in programing and electronics would not be enough. I plan on attaining a masters in Computer Science and a minor in Electrical Engineering. As for my career, I'd like to use my skills to create revolutionary software and electronic systems. My experience with programing my own artificial intelligence assistant software has opened up my mind to the possibilities; personal robotic assistants, automated homes and so much more. I hope to work with companies like IBM and Microsoft and institutes like MIT to assist in the creation of self-aware artificial intelligence software, helping our species cross the bridge from mere mortals to, in a way, gods. I'd also like to contribute to space exploration, working on software for our rockets and even implementing such artificial intelligence to assist in future missions.

Suffering is natural, but that does not mean we should stand by idly. Both of these fields could greatly benefit our species as a whole and I wish to be a part of them. Education is the first step.

Many Thanks

Thiago, this essay is very pressing as you only have a few words, 250 to be exact, in justifying your career goals,
however, it is also good in a way that you will be drawn to writing the words that really matter to the essay and will

streamline the ideas.

Now, let me help in enhancing your essay.

- For me it wasI, on the other hand, is different.

- I realized that my 4 years of self-teaching ( do you mean self - studying?)
- I plan on attaining a masters degree in
- As for my careerCareer wise , I'd like to use my
- has opened up my mind to the possibilities;

- benefit our speciesrace ( species - is more applicable for animals ) as a whole
- and I wish towill be a part of themthe team .

There you have it Thiago, you have a very interesting essay, needless to say, it did answer what is asked
of the prompt and that's about it from me. I hope it helped.