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After completing my master in UK i will return to indonesia and continue my career as internal auditor of indonesian government. I will use the skills and knowledge that I have while studying in the UK to advance my career in the future.
I am targeting promotion from team member to team leader within 2 years from now. At this level, the abilities I have gained from my master course and network will greatly assist my task in building communication with various elements in implementing government policy governance. Six years later, I targeted a promotion to a technical supervisor level and two years later returned to promotion to a supervisory coordinator. At both levels of this position, my ability as an internal auditor of the Indonesian government is needed to communicate and implement government public policies to succeed. As a government auditor overseeing the implementation of government performance accountability systems is a fundamental task. Therefore, it is necessary to maintain and build cooperation with stakeholders to make the policy more beneficial for the community and partners. Three years later I targeted to be the chief representative. This position has a great responsibility for me as an auditor in overseeing and implementing public policies at the local/regional government. Five years later I'm targeting I've become the highest leader in the institution I work for right now. At this level, responsibility is enormous in terms of guarding and formulating government policies. At this level a network (national or international) that has been built will be very useful to achieve the goals of government organizations. This can be done by building governance and supervision and building cooperation with other parties. A few years later if I had the opportunity I would target being a minister or head of government organization even president of indonesia.The UK can take this opportunity to create more lucrative bilateral relations between Indonesia and the UK through UK projects in Indonesia.
Internal auditors are responsible for overseeing and implementing Indonesian government policies. Current issues in public policy in Indonesia include long bureaucracy, lack of transparency, inconsistent regulations, poor infrastructure resulting in high costs. On the other hand, Indonesia is a country of abundant natural resources, high levels of consumption, the largest economy in southeast asia, and stable politics since the 1998 reforms. For that I will encourage governments to fix those weaknesses through better monitoring systems and influence government policy in generating accountable and transparent public policies such as developing an investment regulatory framework, local taxes and policies in other economic sectors.
If good and clean governance of Indonesia is established within the next 15-20 years in which I will play an important role, Indonesia will become a major economic powerhouse in the world. Opportunities to increase cooperation with other countries such as the UK will be enormous. Both countries can increase their bilateral cooperation which is currently under Singapore, Japan, US, South Korea, Netherlands, and British Virgin Islands as the biggest investors to Indonesia.
