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Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - AAS Public Policy



Ytr879 1 / 1  
Feb 26, 2025   #1
Hi everyone, please kindly check my essay for AAS 2026 intake. Thank you so much for your help

Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? (max 2000 characters)

I hope to become an expert in public policy by studying relevant master program at Australia. I work as internal auditor in Inspectorate General of Ministry of Finance (MoF) with responsibilitites to give assurance and consulting services and propose recommendation to improve effectiveness of governance, risk management, and control processes. Inspectorate General play a pivot role in evaluating and providing recommendations related to policies in MoF. However, this hasn't been optimal due to a lack of knowledge and skills among auditors. I believe learning public policy will enhance my skills about analysing and evaluating policies which can solve that issue.

After doing research on several public policy programs in Australia, I consider the Master of Public Policy at Australia National University suits my need. Through this coursework, I will have an opportuniy to extend my understanding of public policy, especially in policy research, evidence and anlysis in public policy. Furthermore, the program has Public Finance and Policy specialisations that will ehance my understanding in key elements of public finance such as taxes and expenditure, budget management, and the use of fiscal policy in the economy.

On the other hand, I find the Master of Economics and Public Policy at The University of Queensland also interesting since it focuses on the economic analytical tools needed to design and evaluate public policies. They also have interesting course such as behavioural economics & public policy, cost benefit analysis & project evaluation. Those course will beneficial for my current role on evaluating and giving recommendation of policy formulation & implementation in MoF.

The skills, knowledge and experience acquired during study in Australia will beneficial not only for my current role as internal auditor, but also for my expected role in MoF as policy maker.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15595  
Feb 27, 2025   #2
You are not being fully informative in your presentation. Consider that you should have a more expanded discussion of how these courses can be applied to your current profession and you will see how your mere restatement of the program will not help the reviewer understand how you plan to implement what you will be learning in your workplace. Your over descriptive opening paragraph is not really necessary as these information should be tied in directly with each course you are considering admission to. While the opening paragraph projects your future career, you should never separate that from your proposed course and institution courses. See where you can fit in these information in terms of course choices and revise your essay to create a more concise and university related response instead.
OP Ytr879 1 / 1  
Feb 28, 2025   #3
@Holt
Thank you for your kind advice, I would consider your comment to revise my essay. I need further help and I'll send you an email. Thanks in advance


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