Why I chose this host organisation and what my proposed leadership activity is intended to achieve

Help me to standardize my response for endeavour scholarship

1.Please summarise, in words that can be understood by a person outside your field, details of your proposed leadership activity, why you chose your proposed host organisation and what your proposed leadership activity is intended to achieve. Also provide details, including proposed dates and locations of any proposed fieldwork and/or internships. (300 words)

I am proposing to pursue Masters of Science in Agriculture at University of New England (UNE), Armidale, Australia., under Endeavour Leadership Program. It is masters' degree program provided by the school of Environment and Rural Sciences under University of New England. The program is course work study which is for two years. I am conditionally offered letter of admission by the University of New England for the course which commences from 4th March 2019 till October, 2020. Each year of the course duration is divided into two trimesters. In the first year, the course demands to complete 96 credit points. The final year is research and thesis writing.

I have chosen University of New England as the institution to host me under ELP. The reasons for choosing the university are driven by multiple factors which are:

1.The UNE offers the proposed leadership activity almost within the tuition fee provisions of ELP program.
2.UNE is known for overall experience of learning under erudite mentors and advanced learning facilities.
3.The location of UNE is at coast of Maine which is so beautiful. The beautiful environment will aid in enriching the learning at UNE.
My proposal to undertake Masters of Science in Agriculture is research designed and I tend to enhance my research skills in agriculture. I want to learn in depth the agricultural production system of Australia and pick those applicable to be replicated in my country. The team work is inherent requirement of the program at UNE which I am going to make good use to equip myself with convivial skills and strategies for common goal of food production with team of agriculture researchers back ion Bhutan. I also intend to improve scientific writing skills to manifest our research in international journals.

Chezang, your essay does not indicate whether you have any intended field work or internships, even though you indicated that the last year will be based on research and thesis writing. Considering that you claim the UNE offers the leadership activity within the program, I can only assume that there is a specific program you forgot to mention that has a training schedule, which is a requirement of the prompt you provided.

If not, then you need to outline the details of your research and thesis writing such as where and when the research will be undertaken as part of the training details. If there is any chance you will need to do any fieldwork for your research, then you should include that in the presentation as part of the required data. You will never go wrong with including that information just the same.