Commonwealth Scholarship development impact p.1; Climate change poses a huge problem for the planet

Questions

How your proposed study relates to:

a) development issues at the global, national and local level?
b) development issues connected to your chosen CSC development theme and the wider sector?

In the 21st century, climate change poses a huge problem for the planet. Many natural disasters and catastrophes may be linked back to human-caused global warming. Included in the effects of climate change are droughts, floods, and severe weather conditions. As they occur in practically every corner of the globe, severe flooding is becoming increasingly prevalent. The Assam floods in India, the Montana floods in the United States, and the Queensland floods in Australia have harmed a large number of people and destroyed several vital facilities. Reuters reports that recent severe rains and floods have flooded a third of Pakistan, resulting in the deaths of over 1,191 people, including 399 children. In order to reduce the effects of flooding, it is essential to leave flood-prone areas as soon as possible. In addition, this is difficult since individuals lack access to early warning systems and government communications. In order to enhance the safety of people, it is necessary to examine the behavior of individuals during natural catastrophes, such as flooding in the current instance. The Flood-Pedestrian Simulator has previously been created using numerical algorithms for several scenarios.

Since the writer has not provided the complete essay in response to the given prompts, I find it difficult to see how his point of view and assessment of world occurrences in relation to international flooding incidents, but not necessarily global warming, is of relevance to the discussion. Aside from running down the flood catastrophes of the previous years, the writer does not truly provide a focused discussion of the international, national, and local levels in relation to his field of interest / studies. He stopped short of that actual explanation just when the first paragraph was getting to the point.

If an applicant wishes to have an appropriate review of his essay, he cannot post it part by part. It will not give me a complete basis for work evaluation. The essay has to flow properly from paragraph to paragraph. The connection should be evident based on the given discussion points. I see none of that in this writing due to the incomplete nature of the presentation.