Communication - What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your study programme?

As a Bachelor of Arts in Communication, I acknowledge that I lack international knowledge related to Information and Communication Technology (ICT) as it applies to my current career and my proposed study program. I seek to develop expertise in digital governance frameworks and media on how to address fragmented digital implementation in autonomous regional governments in Indonesia and how digital transformation is often reduced to mere web presence. As a member of the younger generation, I realized that digital literacy is one of the key aspects of e-government in order to promote public participation and institutional transparency. My goal is to find out how e-government and media can affect the participation of the public, the communication of policy and the transparency of institutions. By incorporating global best practices through my proposed study program, I can enhance my skill to develop a better blueprint which is in line with the direction of Indonesia national sustainable development

Does my answer suitable for the question? I'm not that experience in writing so anny suggestions/feedback wud be awesome

This is severely incorrect grammar. Bachelor of Arts in Communication is a course of study, it is not a person. You are the person enrolled in this course, the student. You should have indicated it as such. You could have said. "As a student of Bachelor..."


Do not admit to any weakness of your part. That could be taken by the reviewer as an admission that you are not qualified to take this course. Always say that you look forward to increasing your skills instead.

The rest of the statement seems acceptable so far. I cannot offer advice regarding how you can better write your response since I do not know the maximum word count for the essay. I will just assume that you are within the acceptable number of words and leave it at that.

It's not a good idea to say in the first line what you lack regarding the course; actually, not directly in any part of the essay, if possible. It's better to focus on how the knowledge you aim to gain from the program will enhance and contribute to your skills, rather than emphasizing any gaps you may have.

@Holt
Thank you for the feedback! The character limit for what i can write is 1200 character