Computer science - Reasons for choosing KAIST

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Please describe your dream and the efforts you have made so far to achieve it and your future plan for it.

Please include your reason(s) for choosing KAIST in order to achieve your dream and the hardships that you expect to encounter in the process.

My field of interest has always been computer science. The only subject that had piqued my interest in my entire school life was IT. Technology, programming, software development, & networking systems designing etc. has always been exciting and wonder subject for me, hence after completing my high school from computer science i started doing web design short course where i boasted up my previous knowledge of html and learned new languages like CSS, java, bootstrap and i am currently doing short course on java script. I wish to keep learning more about the languages i don't know about and lots of interesting knowledge in the field of IT and computer science, and i believe kaist would be the best place for that. I have great affection for computer science as i met many wonderful people and had true friends through it and i expect kaist to be a place where i can learn and meet many new people as well and i am willing to endure any hardships to achieve my dreams there. I am well prepared for the challenges of studying at kaist. My future goal is to make Computer science field flourish in Pakistan as it is still a developing country which makes my desire to study abroad even stronger to gain valuable experience. Hence the education offered by kaist can give me the experience, skills, and the confidence that I will need to achieve my goals.

Fold in the reasons why your learning interests can be met only by KAIST. Discuss how the educational system and training programs of the university address your specific learning desires. How does the KAIST system support your professional ambition ? Be more specific about these aspects. Right now the content of the essay is repetitive and lacking in a focused direction. The content is excited without reason. There is a purpose but no specific ambition behind it. I need you to calm down and be more reflective about the guide question responses. Think about the specifics of each question. Outline your responses first. Ensure the responses have considerable merit when read and considered. Write a new essay that actually tries to impress the reviewer because right now, that is not happening.