These courses will help me to move the tech-community in Pakistan a step closer towards digitization

Studying in the UK Question

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I learned programming skills in bachelor degree due to studying some programming courses, such as developing websites, building Android applications. However, if I gain enough knowledge and skills, I will be able to build large-scale complex software systems and can help the tech-community in Pakistan to move a step closer towards digitization.

Based on the above, I have chosen three courses at three different universities in UK.

First is Computer Systems and Network Engineering at University of Greenwich. The reason I have chosen this course is because it is very pertinent to my previous education and current work experience. My undergraduate education background is Software Engineering, in which I studied courses of Networking, and currently, I'm working as an intern in a Telecom Organisation which requires me to provide hassle-free services to customers 24x7. I'm doing this internship without getting any salary just to learn about networking, which will help me in future. This course offers a great combination of next-generation networking techniques which will be helpful in my career. If I choose to go down this path in future. I will be able to suggest new techniques of networking to any organization and influence the top-tier to make the best use of my acquired knowledge which will help the public at large, thus improving their lives.

Secondly, I have chosen Software Engineering at the City University of London. I chose this course because it is industry-focused course is for Computer Science graduates and experienced professional programmers interested in developing high-quality, complex software systems, which I already mentioned as one of my long-term career goals. Background in software engineering and establishing myself as an entrepreneur to lead a team of five people to develop an android app, this course will improve my programming skills further and I will be able to develop high-end quality software systems using languages like the C++, Java programming languages and the UML modelling language, which this course offers.

Lastly, I have chosen Software Engineering at the Queen Mary University of London. I have chosen this course to improve my ability to build interactive systems design for websites and learn about Big Data Processing, this university offers these modules in this course which I want to learn. My advantage is that I already hold a bachelor degree in software engineering and having recently launched a non-profit website (Alpha Brains) with other colleagues, the modules like Semantic Web and Interactive design will help me a lot in building quality websites in future and it will be easy for me that I already studied basics of many modules this course offers.

These courses will accelerate my future career advancement in building mobile applications, websites and other quality software systems. After learning new knowledge and acquiring new skills, I believe I can make a difference, at least to the technological ecosystem of Pakistan.

i see that you really covered the required points for this question , you mentioned the reasons of selection as well as how effective they are to ur future career path. Good Luck !

i 'm not sure whether the following sentence requires a word before as "Having" for ex
Background in software engineering and ..........
* Having background .....

I think your essay similar with mine? are you copy my essay?

@pitopang
I don't think so, I read a lot of essays online and everyone has the same format like mine, opening paragraph and three university courses in new paragraphs and then a sentence to conclude the essay... This is the most common format, don't worry. The content need to have some meaning, the structure don't matter. I hope I answered your question.

You know what? Your essay will be a lot stronger if you don't use our opening and closing paragraphs. Just let the university choices and course information speak for you. You did an excellent job of integrating your academic and professional experiences within each of the course choices you made. The presentation that you used made the opening and closing sentences redundant and not really impressive anymore. So you can remove those parts and just keep the current course outline presentation in its place. Please be conscious of the fact that redundancies are frowned upon in a Chevening essay so, since you already mentioned information from your long term career goals in your post study essay, it would be best to remove that reference in this essay. Avoid redundancies at all costs. It isn't going to help your essay to repeat information to the reviewer when you were already cautioned about that in the prompt requirements.