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describe your favorite place in your hometown. How does it contribute to your life experience?



huyenan 1 / -  
Jan 4, 2024   #1
When the dawn starts rising, the sun peeks out from behind buildings. Rows of trees surrounding the road create a relaxed space. The fresh air fills my lungs and boosts my energy for a new day. That is my feeling when I cycle around West Lake, which is my favorite place in my hometown.

In contrast to the hustle and bustle of urban life, West Lake creates a slow-paced lifestyle, that focuses on themselves. Cycling around West Lake is an incredible experience that made me get away from technological gadgets. In addition, I have time for reflecting on myself and enjoying the beautiful sightseeing. When I get closer to nature, all my worries are disappeared and I can find my real voice. When I look deeper into my inner world, I can find the solution for all my issues.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15385  
Jan 10, 2024   #2
Your description of West Lake seems to be lacking. You are describing the roads but not the specific place. The generated idea is so non - descript, the location could be located anywhere in your country or area. It needs to be more imaginative in presentation. Take the rider on that bike trip with you. Is there a lake somewhere in the the area? Why is it called West Lake?

I would not advise that you get used to using regular and tired descriptors like "hustle and bustle" since these are memorized English phrases. In fact, the first 2 sentences of the second paragraph sounds like it came from the website of the community. That limited the personal relationship that you have with the area.


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