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Environmental problems are serious in many countries. Protection at an international level only.



minhuyen18 1 / -  
Feb 25, 2017   #1
Topic: environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect environment is at an international level. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

measures of coping with the environmental problems



Answer:
Environment problems are one of the most important challenges almost every countries which are facing. Whether international cooperation is the only way to tackle this is a controversial issue. My view is that citizens can take part in environmental protection.

First, It is obvious that human activities have a great impact on environment throughout. Both environmental contamination and conservation are a long - term process, and the government cannot meet this challenge alone. For example, if someone turn off the light when no one in room, which is a good way to save energy. So, whoever created this problem should solve it. If citizens have tense of environmental protection, they will make a great contribution to environment.

Moreover, public's wills and behaviors are a critical influence to government's policy. For instance, if seriously pollutant soil decreased the productivity of agriculture, it would be food shortages. Another instance, if the companies that manufacture such as plastic products switch to environment-friendly products instead of using throw-away products, it would reduce pollution. Those instances relate to government's policy.

That not to say that international cooperation cannot positively contribution. These efforts would be fail if government did not cooperate with each other. The multinational cooperation gives effective solution or set international standard for environmental protection. However, they need public's appreciate and support to bring a better result.

In sum, individuals on the planet can make a small difference. Meanwhile, global cooperation must shoulder their responsibility to encourage low-carbon lifestyle. By doing so can we make sure that we can hand the beautiful planet for our next generous, and the next generous after. (302 words)

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15393  
Feb 25, 2017   #2
Min, there was a total misunderstanding of the prompt on your part. The instruction is for you to agree or disagree with the given statement. As such, your opening statement should have contained the words "I agree / disagree with the opinion provided based on the following reasons". This is not an opinion based essay so to say "My view is that..." is a mistake. Always present the prompt requirements in the manner that you are expected to discuss it in the essay. The term "My view" is something related to an opinion essay.

Then, there is the problem of your actual discussion which focused on the national government responsibilities rather than the international community involvement that the prompt based the statement upon. While you present a good discussion, the information you provided was not in the manner that the prompt instructed. So it became even more obvious that you failed to properly understand the requirements of the essay. As such, I do not believe that you can get a score higher than a 4. The main reason being that your discussion format is inappropriate for the prompt requirements.


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