Farming interest - Describe the world you come from

the world i come from

Growing up in Biemso N0-2, a village in the Ahafo-Ano south District of Ashanti Region (Ghana), was stressful yet full of great memories. I was raised by my Grandmother alongside a senior brother, while my mother was in the city hustling with my other siblings.

I had my basic education at the village, and schooling there was a bit difficult, as we had less access to quality educational materials and facilities such as text books, Library, I.C.T LAB, and above all, there was no Electricity in the Village.

We had to use Lantern when solving our home assignments every evening, and after that we wait for the moon light to appear, so we could go out and play.

I have strong interest in farming, and I believe it's due to the fact that I visited the farm with my grandmother during vacations and holidays, and I loved those moments a lot.

I lost my father when I was 3 months old, which means that I couldn't capture his looks than to even spend time with him, but my mother keeps telling me that my interest in reading and problem solving are indeed great characters that I inherited from him.

Well, my mother, as well as my siblings, have been my utmost inspiration towards success, as they have always motivated, advised and supported me In everything that I do. Being the first person to complete Senior High School, they all expect me to live the dreams they couldn't live due to financial hardship.

I pray that my dreams and aspirations to become successful come to pass, so that I can take good care of my family, and that someday, I will own a P.H.D.

Use another word to describe the struggle of your mother to earn an income. "Hustle" is an English slang word that connotes a negative method of earning an income, usually through illicit or illegal means. You do not want that sort of image ingrained into the reviewer's mind.


You are showing poor grammar and sentence structure control. Know when to capitalize a word and when not to capitalize it. The reviewer is also using this essay to assess your grasp and degree of English usage. You are starting to appear at a non-college level at this point.

You described your background but did not refer to the background in terms of how it influenced how you see the world within your area and beyond it. This is not just a written description of where you came from, you must also indicate the influence your world and the exposure within it created your point of you regarding personal, social, and / or moral matters. You may choose one of the 3 options to focus your revised essay on in relation to the description of your community.

Thank You very much for your advice