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In 500 words or less, please describe your short-term and long-term personal and education/career goals and what has helped to shape your goals. What specific steps will you take to reach your personal/education/career goals?
At this moment my first short-term goal is to be a straight A's student for this semester. I have a B in my AP Calculus class and I need to get an A in the semester exam next week. I am spending most of my time to review each chapter that I have learn so far by watching academic videos on Youtube, practicing more, and staying after school for extra help.. After surviving through this semester exam, I will use most of my time for searching and applying numerous scholarships in order to assist me paying for college. I have created an excel file which saves all information of scholarships that I am eligible and there is a link for each of them which helps me go directly to the application. University of Nevada, Las Vegas have accepted my application. In next 4 years I will get my bachelor's degree in Pre-medical program. Right after that, I will find a job as a medical assistant. The following years of my life will spend in the Medical school of US Air Force for my PhD. degree. I would train myself not only in professional knowledge but also in physical and mental health. There is innumerable obstacle in my career path but I believe I can absolutely get it. I always organize things logically, I have plans for what I want for a specific period of time and an intense passion always blazes inside me. In my opinion, success is summed up in six words: never give up, try it again. I picture myself as a shy girl, so to build a good self-confidence I would try a dance class. Dancing gives me more chances to make friend with people and help me get involve in communities to explore more aspects of myself. At the age of six, I was asked about my dream. Surprisingly, I answered that I want to be a doctor without any ideas about that career. My mom was the first person who brought me the idea of being a doctor. Growing up with that dream, I have seen how people around me fought with either mental or physical diseases but I really could not help them. Once I felt impotent when my uncle died because of cancer. He is my favorite uncle but I did not do anything to help him get better; it was a sock for me. From that point, the idea of being a doctor has developed in my mind The awe of discovering the human body, the honor to be trusted to give advice, the gratitude for helping people through a difficult illness,...these things never grow old.
In 500 words or less, please describe your short-term and long-term personal and education/career goals and what has helped to shape your goals. What specific steps will you take to reach your personal/education/career goals?
straight A's student
At this moment my first short-term goal is to be a straight A's student for this semester. I have a B in my AP Calculus class and I need to get an A in the semester exam next week. I am spending most of my time to review each chapter that I have learn so far by watching academic videos on Youtube, practicing more, and staying after school for extra help.. After surviving through this semester exam, I will use most of my time for searching and applying numerous scholarships in order to assist me paying for college. I have created an excel file which saves all information of scholarships that I am eligible and there is a link for each of them which helps me go directly to the application. University of Nevada, Las Vegas have accepted my application. In next 4 years I will get my bachelor's degree in Pre-medical program. Right after that, I will find a job as a medical assistant. The following years of my life will spend in the Medical school of US Air Force for my PhD. degree. I would train myself not only in professional knowledge but also in physical and mental health. There is innumerable obstacle in my career path but I believe I can absolutely get it. I always organize things logically, I have plans for what I want for a specific period of time and an intense passion always blazes inside me. In my opinion, success is summed up in six words: never give up, try it again. I picture myself as a shy girl, so to build a good self-confidence I would try a dance class. Dancing gives me more chances to make friend with people and help me get involve in communities to explore more aspects of myself. At the age of six, I was asked about my dream. Surprisingly, I answered that I want to be a doctor without any ideas about that career. My mom was the first person who brought me the idea of being a doctor. Growing up with that dream, I have seen how people around me fought with either mental or physical diseases but I really could not help them. Once I felt impotent when my uncle died because of cancer. He is my favorite uncle but I did not do anything to help him get better; it was a sock for me. From that point, the idea of being a doctor has developed in my mind The awe of discovering the human body, the honor to be trusted to give advice, the gratitude for helping people through a difficult illness,...these things never grow old.
