Please, I need help with checking to see if I have answered the Essay correctly, Grammatical or Typographical errors, where I can improve and if there is any paragraph that doesn't tally with what has been asked. Its 250 words for each essay. Thank you
Q: We want to hear what motivates you and what you are passionate about. Please write about a topic that is important to you, and reflects who you are/your values.
Learning new things has always been a great motivator for me. In everything I do, I believe I've always been able to learn something new, or a new way to look at a problem and solve it.
I am a natural team player, I would always cherish being in a room with a bunch of smart people pushing for the same cause. And when it's all done, I love preparing and giving presentations. Being in front of an audience, and seeing them respond to our ideas is a real thrill, and making that connection is inspiring and exciting. I am going to be talking about teamwork
What is teamwork? There are several ways to define teamwork, but for some color, let's think of it as the French do. The French language has an excellent expression to describe it: "Esprit de corps". This means a sense of unity, of enthusiasm for common interests and responsibilities, as developed among a group of persons closely associated with a task, cause, enterprise, etc. It is the process of working collaboratively with a group of people in order to achieve a goal.
Teamwork is a crucial part of our everyday lives, as it is often necessary for people to work well together, trying their best in any circumstance. Teamwork means that people will try to cooperate, using their individual skills and providing constructive feedback, despite any personal conflict between individuals.
The second idea I had for a topic was True Greatness/ success. Talking about how true greatness/ success in life is achieved by helping others. do you think this would have made a better topic?
Q: We want to hear what motivates you and what you are passionate about. Please write about a topic that is important to you, and reflects who you are/your values.
I am a natural team player
Learning new things has always been a great motivator for me. In everything I do, I believe I've always been able to learn something new, or a new way to look at a problem and solve it.
I am a natural team player, I would always cherish being in a room with a bunch of smart people pushing for the same cause. And when it's all done, I love preparing and giving presentations. Being in front of an audience, and seeing them respond to our ideas is a real thrill, and making that connection is inspiring and exciting. I am going to be talking about teamwork
What is teamwork? There are several ways to define teamwork, but for some color, let's think of it as the French do. The French language has an excellent expression to describe it: "Esprit de corps". This means a sense of unity, of enthusiasm for common interests and responsibilities, as developed among a group of persons closely associated with a task, cause, enterprise, etc. It is the process of working collaboratively with a group of people in order to achieve a goal.
Teamwork is a crucial part of our everyday lives, as it is often necessary for people to work well together, trying their best in any circumstance. Teamwork means that people will try to cooperate, using their individual skills and providing constructive feedback, despite any personal conflict between individuals.
The second idea I had for a topic was True Greatness/ success. Talking about how true greatness/ success in life is achieved by helping others. do you think this would have made a better topic?
