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Management Consulting: Is this essay ok for Scholarship in MS degree?



davoodhayati 1 / 1  
Apr 20, 2010   #1
Dear Ms. ....,
I am applying for Scholarship in MS course in Management Consulting, which will be started in 2010 in [name of institute]. Let me express about my background and reasons why I have opted to take this course.

When young, I was very curious to know what happens in the huge refineries and petrochemicals and how they convert crude oil into petrol or diesel. My curiosities were solved up to an extent when I studied Chemical Engineering at Petroleum University of Technology, Ahwaz. In the collage, my affection towards this field further enhanced. As my graduation was completed at Ahwaz, I got job at the prestigious Bandar Imam Petrochemical Co. at Bandar Imam. In BIPC complex, I could get experience in various fields namely operation, conceptualization of new projects, awarding of contracts, basic engineering, detailed engineering and site construction work. Later on, I participated in a MS program in Construction Management in [name of institute].

I want to strengthen my knowledge in the field of management and hence applied for the post graduation course in [name of institute]. I still feel that there is more scope of knowing details on topics like managing a company, solving managerial challenges in ever-changing economic environment, strategic management, intercultural challenges in human resource management, and improving productivity of workforce.

While doing the course I will be meeting students from various countries and discipline and it will give me a chance to develop knowledge like presentation skills, working in team, adjusting with unlike human behavior, negotiation skills, analyzing problems, etc.

Hope I will be selected for admission in MS course and will be able to increase my knowledge on professional as well as personal ground.

Sincerely yours

Davood Hayati

April 20, 2010

EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Apr 21, 2010   #2
Use fewer words:
...which will start in 2010 at [name of institute].

In the At collage college, my affection towards this field was further enhanced.

This is very impressive!!
While doing the course I will be meeting students from various countries and disciplines , and it will...

I hope I will be selected for admission in MS course and that I will be able to increase my knowledge on professional as well as personal ground.

:-)
OP davoodhayati 1 / 1  
Apr 21, 2010   #3
Kevin,
Thanks a lot. I was very helpful.
Davood


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