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Resilience, determination, and compassion - Application for Mastercard Scholarship



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Oct 28, 2024   #1
Topic: An essay on experience I would bring to the community, how I meet the key selection on criteria for the program, particularly in relation to significant barriers to education I faced.

I'm writing based on the Mastercard scholarships and I would appreciate any assistance I can get.

My journey has been shaped by resilience, adaptability, and a commitment to community service, qualities developed through overcoming personal and systemic challenges. Pursuing an education in Nigeria has presented numerous obstacles, including prolonged ASUU strikes, financial constraints, and the COVID-19 pandemic, all of which tested my determination. These barriers interrupted my studies and limited my access to resources, but they also fostered in me a strong resolve to push forward. To support myself during these interruptions, I took on menial jobs and freelance writing, which instilled in me a deep sense of perseverance and self-reliance. This experience has fueled my commitment to advocating for accessible and inclusive education, an endeavor I believe is critical for Africa's future.

A pivotal part of my journey has been my volunteer work with the visually impaired community. Through various outreaches, I provided resources such as eyeglasses and Braille materials, gaining firsthand insight into the unique challenges faced by people with disabilities. This experience reinforced my belief in the power of inclusive development policies and strengthened my dedication to social equity. Working alongside people with disabilities taught me empathy, patience, and a service-oriented approach to leadership, values that I see deeply reflected in the Mastercard Foundation's mission to empower African leaders.

My vision for Africa is rooted in sustainable development, inclusive growth, and governance, ideals that the Mastercard Foundation Scholars Program and the University of Edinburgh's Africa and International Development program strongly embody. I am eager to explore how development theories and strategies can help bridge existing gaps in education and social equity, especially through the lens of policy and technology.

If selected, I would bring resilience, determination, and compassion to the Mastercard community. These qualities have guided me through my journey, and I am committed to using them to uplift and inspire others. I am driven to contribute to Africa's development, and I am confident that this program will provide the knowledge and platform to create meaningful change. The Mastercard Foundation's focus on transformative leadership aligns perfectly with my goals, and I am excited to bring my experiences to this vibrant community, working alongside fellow scholars to address Africa's pressing challenges.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15344  
Oct 28, 2024   #2
Consider using more specific examples of the traits you mentioned. The way that you describe these in your essay is not even one dimensional, it is completely boring and devoid of actual implementation samples. Rather than the first paragraph content, you should consider developing the 2nd paragraph presentation for the overall essay. Try to include the name of the community development group that you belonged to, what its mission is, what role you played and how you developed your traits even further because of that experience. That way you can believable reference these as what you will be bringing to the student community of whatever university you will be attending should you be chosen as a scholar. Do not reference the Mastercard community because you will be bringing these traits with you to the student community of the college or university you will be attending.


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