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"Science is merely common sense at its best" ; SOP for ERASMUS MUNDUS scholarship



mizna 1 / 1  
Jan 4, 2013   #1
Hi there, i have written this personal statment, please go through it and feel free to comment and tell me if any changings are to be made.. i will be very thank ful to u all :)

"Science is merely commonsense at it's best that is, strictly precise and exact in surveillance and ruthless to myth in logic."
My deepest personality trait is that I am a keen observer with technical attitude, since my childhood. My passion and optimism has urged me to find sane destinations tremendously. Curiosities and commitments are in my blood; this is the reason I am heading towards master's program in Poletecnico De Milano. Though I have crafted my life with strong determinations and will power, still I have to polish my carrier with higher studies. I have firm belief and stability to seek and acquire, learning life and its mechanisms deeply and solely.

The thing that urged me to go for electronics was my interest since childhood where I used to open up my toys to know how they actually work , and finally it shaped my future when I made my first science project in 6th class where I used sensor attached to the fan and I was controlling the fan with remote and I was awarded a medal for that. I have done my B.E in Electronics Engineering and finally enrolled in Masters in Electronics Engineering and since childhood I have got fabulous achievements related to science, technology and dominantly welfare. I think that's not all to cope up with this electronic era of revolutions and moderations... my primary objective is to equip myself with comprehensive knowledge of theoretical as well as practical aspects. My academic record throughout my life is also worth worthy and I will prove myself furthermore with my extreme enthusiasm and endeavours.

I have always been the most outstanding student of my academy and for this I was awarded "Best Student Of The Year Award 2004" in my school "PIGGOT MEMORIAL GIRLS HIGHER SECONDARY SCHOOL" , in university time i had been very active student, I had always been among topers in my school ,college as well as in university time period . I was made the head of "debating society" .When the earthquake struck Pakistan on October 7, 2005, I set up a team, to help the victims that were badly affected, there i realized the importance of team work and i formed a community in my university, entitled as Mehran University student team. The basic theme of this society is to engage students and to provide wide variety of activities and arrange academic lectures in their free schedule and i was the head of "women trainer". I am also an active member of IEEE and organized "WIE(Women In ENGNEERING)session a few months ago to bring awareness among women. In addition, I was awarded the certificate on participation in various co-curricular activities, such as debates and sports.

i have participated in many projects and circuit design ,programming competitions and many more and won many competitions too, I have been always all rounder, and excellent academic record, i have always secured A+ and recieved many merit scholarships. I would successfully balance work and studies and eventually become a graduate soon and looking forward for foreign scholarship award and will feel proud to be call one of the Erasmus Mundas award holder.

I have the ability to recognize breach in knowledge, skills and abilities of an individual and to develop the skills that has renouned and can grow independently, I have the capacity to understand the idea of the new master to apply knowledge and to ameliorate faculty of thoughts and reason with strong computer skills and software implementation independently, I possess the ability to learn technical tools and to amend them in interdisciplinary project. I know how to manage an individual's reaction and attitude towards responsibilities, I am challanging and promising in the work, goals, aims and assignments .I truly respect other people's beliefs, customs, culture, traditions, principles and stance.

Being solemn, First and foremost all my goals are directed towards my Academic objectives, I would like to excel in my field of study. Its a fact that incredible amendments are being made since the world of globalization started. So I want to touch high beacons with my fulfilled ambitions. I would like go for an advanced academic training in the area of electronics engineering that could help me throughout my life. To get an overwhelming command on my specific field, the difference in the technology involved with respect to Pakistan, and professional work environment prevalent there.

Italy is pre-dominantly the country of revolutions and indeed a fascinating milestone. It would be a great pleasure and privilege to me if I get admission in Politechnico De Milano inspiring institute which is having a distinguished and high standard faculty above racism, will consequently arm me with knowledge and power which I am seeking for. With high dreams in my eyes and conquering soul, I strongly believe that hopefully if I step-in, will gather the rainbow colors and will prove myself beyond imaginations. Research developments and reputed technical environment of this university will probably make me a magician of robotics and technology.

lethicia 2 / 2  
Jan 4, 2013   #2
I find your writing very interesting! I would only review the punctuation and some capital letters which were missed.
OP mizna 1 / 1  
Jan 4, 2013   #3
thanks alott lethicia for your rapid response,glad to have your comments and positive comments :-)


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