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Personal statement for gks undergraduate medical student 2025 embassy track



legendshibawaekh 1 / -  
Jun 28, 2024   #1
Imagine waking up in the middle of the night to the sound of an ambulance rushing by, it's siren echoing through the silent streets. As you lie there, heart racing, instead of feeling fear, you are filled with an overwhelming sense of urgency and purpose. You realize in that moment that your dream of studying medicine isn't just about the science or prestige, it's about the opportunity to make a difference, to be there in those critical moment when lives hang in the balance. This realization fuels your passion and set you on a path towards becoming a healer, a beacon of hope in time of darkness.
Back in my junior high school days, I have always dreamed to be a medic but I never took it seriously because I was young. At that time I had a best friend who suffered from rheumatism, anytime she was in pain I felt vulnerable because I had no knowledge of what to do which hurts me badly. All I did was wait patiently until she was back from the hospital, and every time she did she would smile at me and tell me she felt all better but deep down I was never satisfied because I knew it wasn't genuine, and it always serves as a reminder for me that I want to become a doctor when I grow up.
One unfortunate day my friend died of her illness which felt so unrealistic to me and made me miserable on the other hand it further fuels my passion for becoming a medic. It made me sit tight and work hard toward my dream and also the reason I have to be a hope for those around the world who are in a critical and desperate situation.
As an aspiring medical student with a passion for healthcare and a strong desire to make a positive impact in the world,I am thrilled to have the opportunity to apply for the 2025 GKS Scholarship program. Coming from a humble background with limited financial resources,I have always understood the value of hard work, determination,and perseverance in achieving my goals.
Studying medicine has been a lifelong dream of mine,driven by a deep-seated commitment to serving others and improving healthcare outcomes in underserved communities. Despite facing financial constraints,I believe that my dedication to this field, coupled with the support and opportunities provided by the GKS Scholarship program,will enable me to realize my academic and professional aspirations.
I am confident that my academic background, volunteer experiences, and personal qualities such as empathy, resilience, and cultural adaptability make me a strong candidate for this prestigious scholarship. I am eager to immerse myself in the rigorous academic curriculum, hands-on clinical training, and research opportunities that the GKS Scholar program offers, knowing that these experiences will not only shape me into a skilled medical professional but also empower me to give back to society in meaningful ways.
I am grateful for the the chance to be considered for this life-changing opportunity and am fully committed to making the most of it. With the support of GKS Scholar program,I am confident that I can overcome financial barriers and focus wholeheartedly on my academic and professional growth in the field of medicine. I look forward to contributing to diverse and dynamic community of scholars, learning from renowned faculty members, and ultimately fulfilling my dream of becoming a compassionate and competent healthcare provider. Also I look forward to strengthening the relationship between my home country and South Korea in an extremely positive way.
Thank you for considering my application. I am excited about the prospect of joining the 2025 GKS Scholar cohort and embarking on this transformative journey towards realizing my full potential as a future healthcare leader.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15461  
Jun 29, 2024   #2
The presentation of this essay is bordering on the dramatic, without really offering any information that would help the reviewer assess if you are truly qualified for a scholarship in medicine. For one thing your friend suffered from rheumatism, nobody dies from that illness. Unless it was a misdiagnosis, in which case, it should have been indicated as one of the factors for your decision to study medicine. You also do not qualify your skills and relevant background in the field of science that would have shown you pursuing a foundation in medical studies. You mention a series of qualifiers in the later part of your essay, but you do not discuss it in the actual essay. So this personal statement does not meet the information requirements for this track. You need to read the writing guidelines again and revise the essay accordingly.


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