Hello everyone, i recently got admission offer to study Msc. Finance and management at Loughborough University. Am seeking for scholarship and i need a personal and financial statement.
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PERSONAL STATEMENT
My purpose for applying to graduate school is to both expand on my existing knowledge and to create additional opportunities for myself in the future. I believe that graduate school will prepare me for a successful and challenging career in the agricultural industry. I have always been a very academically determined and studious individual, hence why I know a master degree in finance and management at the reputable Loughborough University would be my definite step after my undergraduate studies at the prestigious Landmark University in order to successfully accomplish all my desired goals in Agriculture and towards achieving food security in my country Nigeria.
I recently got a conditional admission offer to study Msc. Finance and Management with the believe this degree will set me in good stead for my career in the agricultural industry in Nigeria. During my undergraduate research studies on "Profitability and Technical Efficiency of Broiler Production in Lagos State Poultry Estate", from my findings; poultry farmers interviewed were faced with the problem of low productivity, disease and inadequate finance which is caused by lack of record keeping which is a managerial problem. I have researched this degree and I believe I have the expertise, leadership, motivation and necessary skills to successfully complete any research given and course works within the specified period of study at Loughborough University.
At Landmark University 3rd Convocation Ceremony, I won the award of the "Best Graduating Student in the Department of Agricultural Extension and Rural Development" with the C.G.P.A of '4.80' (96%) and also won the award for "Agro-revolution Vision Driven Chancellor's Award". The aforementioned meritorious awards were possible as a result of my progressive quest for excellence at every given endeavours.
During my undergraduate studies at Landmark University, I was engaged in leadership position in several capacities. Firstly, I held the position of the "Residency Hall Director of Daniel Hall at Landmark University Hall of Residence. I supervise weekly community development and environmental activities, facilitates effective communication between students and hall administrators, mobilise and lead other students to any university gatherings and report promptly any incident that requires urgent attention and intervention at the Directorate of Student Affairs, Landmark University. I also served as the Financial Secretary of the "Prison Support Team" under the big umbrella of Landmark University Liberation Army, a non-profit voluntary community development/charity organization from 2013 to 2015. I was involved in keeping financial records of all activities geared towards reaching out to inmates at various prisons across Nigeria, supporting inmates with financial donations and other items required for well-being of prisoners.
Towards attaining a sustainable development in Nigeria, I was involved in the "National Youth Service Corps". A para-military endeavour of engaging young graduates in an organized activity that would contribute to the local, national and global community. It also affords me the opportunity for self improvement, development and empowerment. I voluntarily joined a team tagged "Rural Rugged" wuth a quest for reaching out to communities at Kaduna state of Nigeria. We distributes clothing materials, food items, and helps homeless war striken people to find reason to live again by being an agent of hope to them, this was achieved by sharing love and caring for them personally.
After my graduation at Landmark University, I volunteered to work in Colossus Investment Limited in order to gain practical experiences and understand the world of works. In my quest for excellence, me and my team solved the problem of cashew seeed wastage due to excessive heat, we worked as a team and successfully came out with a local means of absorbing moisture by inventing dry bags. I was also awarded the "Junior staff of the month" due to my hardwork and continious quest for excellence in every endeavours.
The Loughborough University Graduate School Development Trust Africa Scholarship will help in actualizing my dreams of solving the agricultural problem of agro-management by coming to Loughborough University to study. It will contribute immensely to the development of my country Nigeria by making me self reliant, financially intelligent in alleviating the managerial problems of Agricultural industry. The knowledge acquired at Loughborough University will be used to set up an Agro-consulting firm aimed at helping livestock farmers increase their productivity and improve their standards of living. The knowledge would be used to set up a training workshop to motivate and inspire young agripreneurs in order to attain a sustainable agricultural development in Nigeria.
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PERSONAL STATEMENT
Sustainable agricultural development
My purpose for applying to graduate school is to both expand on my existing knowledge and to create additional opportunities for myself in the future. I believe that graduate school will prepare me for a successful and challenging career in the agricultural industry. I have always been a very academically determined and studious individual, hence why I know a master degree in finance and management at the reputable Loughborough University would be my definite step after my undergraduate studies at the prestigious Landmark University in order to successfully accomplish all my desired goals in Agriculture and towards achieving food security in my country Nigeria.
I recently got a conditional admission offer to study Msc. Finance and Management with the believe this degree will set me in good stead for my career in the agricultural industry in Nigeria. During my undergraduate research studies on "Profitability and Technical Efficiency of Broiler Production in Lagos State Poultry Estate", from my findings; poultry farmers interviewed were faced with the problem of low productivity, disease and inadequate finance which is caused by lack of record keeping which is a managerial problem. I have researched this degree and I believe I have the expertise, leadership, motivation and necessary skills to successfully complete any research given and course works within the specified period of study at Loughborough University.
At Landmark University 3rd Convocation Ceremony, I won the award of the "Best Graduating Student in the Department of Agricultural Extension and Rural Development" with the C.G.P.A of '4.80' (96%) and also won the award for "Agro-revolution Vision Driven Chancellor's Award". The aforementioned meritorious awards were possible as a result of my progressive quest for excellence at every given endeavours.
During my undergraduate studies at Landmark University, I was engaged in leadership position in several capacities. Firstly, I held the position of the "Residency Hall Director of Daniel Hall at Landmark University Hall of Residence. I supervise weekly community development and environmental activities, facilitates effective communication between students and hall administrators, mobilise and lead other students to any university gatherings and report promptly any incident that requires urgent attention and intervention at the Directorate of Student Affairs, Landmark University. I also served as the Financial Secretary of the "Prison Support Team" under the big umbrella of Landmark University Liberation Army, a non-profit voluntary community development/charity organization from 2013 to 2015. I was involved in keeping financial records of all activities geared towards reaching out to inmates at various prisons across Nigeria, supporting inmates with financial donations and other items required for well-being of prisoners.
Towards attaining a sustainable development in Nigeria, I was involved in the "National Youth Service Corps". A para-military endeavour of engaging young graduates in an organized activity that would contribute to the local, national and global community. It also affords me the opportunity for self improvement, development and empowerment. I voluntarily joined a team tagged "Rural Rugged" wuth a quest for reaching out to communities at Kaduna state of Nigeria. We distributes clothing materials, food items, and helps homeless war striken people to find reason to live again by being an agent of hope to them, this was achieved by sharing love and caring for them personally.
After my graduation at Landmark University, I volunteered to work in Colossus Investment Limited in order to gain practical experiences and understand the world of works. In my quest for excellence, me and my team solved the problem of cashew seeed wastage due to excessive heat, we worked as a team and successfully came out with a local means of absorbing moisture by inventing dry bags. I was also awarded the "Junior staff of the month" due to my hardwork and continious quest for excellence in every endeavours.
The Loughborough University Graduate School Development Trust Africa Scholarship will help in actualizing my dreams of solving the agricultural problem of agro-management by coming to Loughborough University to study. It will contribute immensely to the development of my country Nigeria by making me self reliant, financially intelligent in alleviating the managerial problems of Agricultural industry. The knowledge acquired at Loughborough University will be used to set up an Agro-consulting firm aimed at helping livestock farmers increase their productivity and improve their standards of living. The knowledge would be used to set up a training workshop to motivate and inspire young agripreneurs in order to attain a sustainable agricultural development in Nigeria.